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A Cold, Cold Heart
by CJ Heck

Wednesday, September 20, 2006
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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the killing of love ...



A Cold, Cold Heart

I offered my heart
in the palm of my hand,
a burning nova
to a private world,
where love and forgiveness
knew no bounds.
Tender and trusting,
it beat only for you
so long ago,
but hurt fans out
like surface ripples
on a pond after a pebble falls.
Each new hurt
spreads rings ever wider
and with each new ring,
more feelings fade
spreading wider,
chilling deeper,
till cold as ice,
they become as stones
bouncing on a frozen pond,
their rhythm etched forever
in a cold, cold heart.

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Reviewed by Rusty Daily 11/24/2006
And those stones send back an echo, fozen in their emptiness. Sad metaphor CJ and so well written.
Ripply Hugs
Reviewed by K. Mulroney 9/22/2006
"they become as stones
bouncing on a frozen pond" Now THAT is a descriptive verse!! Keep em coming!


Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 9/21/2006
So vivid. Excellently expressed..
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 9/21/2006
A soul-reaching creation, CJ. Most compelling. Thank you. Love and peace,

Regis
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 9/21/2006
Sadly beautiful offering...sometimes we give too much..and then we close up...when hurt so deeply it crush the soul!!!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by A PAX 9/21/2006
So visual, sad.........yet.....I see a determination, more than a resignation to this poem

and with each new ring,
more feelings fade
spreading wider, chilling deeper,
til cold as ice,
they become as stones
bouncing on a frozen pond


Timing is everything :)
pax A
Reviewed by Brett Moore 9/20/2006
What a great poem. The imagery of a rippling effect of coldness is so real.
Reviewed by Brittany Renée 9/20/2006
Wow... this made me tear up. I just broke up with my fiance and this hit hard! Awesome and beautiful.
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader) 9/20/2006
Sad but beautiful in construction. Great imagery. We have to be careful to whom we offer our hearts. Victor
Reviewed by Peter Paton 9/20/2006
CJ

This reminded me greatly of my own poem " Cold Cold Heart "...and also one of my Beloved Mum's sayings to me..." Cold Hands....Warm Heart, Son..."..

Love and Hugs

Peter
Reviewed by E T Waldron 9/20/2006
Powerful poem that stirs the senses. Cold hearts are intriguing. One wonders how they got that way, and you show some reasons...sad...Superb poem, CJ!



Eileen
Reviewed by Felix Perry 9/20/2006
Wow...intense and breathtaking though very sadly touching.
Fee



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