The Return
by
CJ Heck
Tuesday, October 03, 2006
Rated "G" by the Author.
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The Return
The weathered building still stood,
its once bright
lemon-yellow facade
now only a faded patchwork
of condemned signs
and boarded windows.
It was the first time
I had ventured back
since losing him.
Steeling my heart
with a deep breath,
I opened the door
and stepped inside.
The rickity stairs were higher
than I remembered,
and now, years later,
the trip up
was almost as difficult
as the trip back
in time.
In ruins thick with dust,
thicker still with memories,
past and present collide.
Slowly pain and sorrow
fade in tears of liberation
to cleanse and dry
on ancient floorboards.
It was right to return.
Some days are diamonds,
some days are dust,
and some days ...
well, some days
can never be anything
but both.
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| Reviewed by Rusty Daily |
1/6/2007 |
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Written as only you can CJ. Bringing us with you by your words, through the door of past memories.
loveya
Rusty |
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| Reviewed by Brett Moore |
10/3/2006 |
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| Excellent poem. I've had many days like this. |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
10/3/2006 |
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Well written!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by H. Lena Jones |
10/3/2006 |
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There is always a daunting feeling when one contemplates a return to a time that once was...but so necessary is this act to bring closure and so be able to move on. A lovely poem, CJ. What was, cannot again be...what is to come is worth pursuing. :)
God Bless you, my friend,
Love always,
Lena |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
10/3/2006 |
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CJ,
A masterful pen, empowering, poignant verse; well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
10/3/2006 |
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The most painful but sometimes the most refreshing and freeing thing in this world is going back across that invisible time line and confronting our past. It takes courage and strength but when done the liveration of heart and mind takes place. Sweet write CJ.
Fee |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
10/3/2006 |
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Great longings in this one.
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o) |
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| Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader) |
10/3/2006 |
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| We can never forget past loves especially since they form part of our make up. Quite a poem. Victor |
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