|Reviewed by Fallen Sword
|Me neither, CJ !!! And that pic of the bumble bee looks like it was taken one microsecond before the sting! BTW, Fallen Sword is AKA Ted L Glines, and I see that your kids' poems are even better than ever [if that is even possible] :)|
|Reviewed by Cherie Durbin
|So cute and so funny!|
|Reviewed by Subhadra Grace Bellord
|Aww! That is so cute! I love reading and writing things for kids!|
|Reviewed by steve Chering
|I love this..but jst to let you know ..we may well think alike............
Bumble bee in my Gumboots
Busy' buzz' busy' buzz, as I walk along.
I just donít understand: where is it coming from?
Walking up the garden path, going in for tea,
And all the while this buzzing noise,
By the side of me.
Turning looking as I go, puzzled as to what,
But thereís no evidence, of buzzers flying round my spot.
Iím flicking up my tee shirt, Iím checking on my chest.
The buzzing sound becoming louder, this must be a test?
I go into the kitchen, the kettles on for me
If only I could find out more, if only I could see.
Iím looking at my gumboots, and now I fear the worst.
Iíll have to take them off real fast, unless he stings me first.
I take my boot off double quick; Iím hopping on one toe.
A bumblebee flies out with a buzz,
And everyone shouts ohĒ
I donít know how it got there; Iíve really no idea.
Iíve gone all cold and shivery,
My hair stands up with fear.
Iíve never been afraid of bees,
Normally I say,
But now I'm going to check my gumboots.
Every single day!
See what I mean?
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|This is sweet. Thank you for the smile over my morning coffee!|
|Reviewed by Stuart - - Macfarlane
|Very Cute :)|
|Reviewed by Katie Gabrielle
|awwww this one is adorable!! thanks for making me smile today!|
|Reviewed by J M
|OHH this is so cute OUCh......|
|Reviewed by Michelle Mills
|SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love this one!!! Michelle|
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
Nice little ditty. Grrrrrrrrr! Bzzzzzzzzzzzz!
|Reviewed by Rusty Daily
|It still amazes me how you can, in a few short lines, capture the sweet innocence of the young. I can just see this little tyke rubbing their nose, wondering why that little bee stung them.|
|Reviewed by Denise Contreras
|Reviewed by H. Lena Jones
|Precious, CJ. You're pretty clever at this stuff!
|Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
|Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia
What an adorable SHORT-Story!!!
My two youngest grandsons, Big Al & Li'l Nick, will love this one! Grandma sure does!
Bless you, Rhonda
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
|Very endearing and full of truth CJ. Well done!
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Ouch. :) Me twin used to catch the little buggers bare handed, they never stung her. Now if she stomped one, you bet *OW* it got her! Better the feet than where me step mom got stung...on the *cringe* nip...(sanitized it for the little ones). Now THAT'S serious hurt. LOL An adorable write, with a cautionary message, STAY AWAY FROM GROUCHY BEES!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
And trust me, I will. :)
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Awwwwww....be lad ANDY was not there yhe woulda "splatted" it!!
|Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
|How's your nose dear JC? Lovely poem. Bet it will make the children laugh. Victor|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Love it. This poem is full of whimsy and delight!;-)
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
It pays to be cautious..;)
Very cute write
You have the heart of a child...which is a true blessing from God..
|Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
|Ah, this is just wonderful....I love it and I tested the waters with it...my three old granddaughter loved it as well. Great write, very cute.
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Ahhh too cute. I love it.
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|OUCH! My step mother got stung in a very delicate area while sunbathing; she still remembers it all these years later~! I have only been stung in the foot, thank goodness, but I did get nailed in the finger by a wasp once. That was worse than the bees! WOUCH!!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Adorable write; hope you are okay!
|Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks
|HaHaHaHa...not funny, tho, for those who have been stung! Enchanting poem...