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Thoughts During an Unsleep ...
by CJ Heck
Saturday, October 07, 2006
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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Oooo, sexy ...
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Thoughts During An Unsleep ...
two o'clock in the morning.
he's snoring like a buzz saw,
while my mind is full of the day,
again.
gotta get some sleep ...
it's just out of reach,
there,
beyond those thoughts,
I can almost feel it,
almost taste it
no, slipping away again ...
funny, you get so close.
damn brain
can't turn it off
it's late,
have to sleep,
much to do tomorrow.
think of love ...
comforting, warm, fuzzy,
mmm... sensual, too,
like making love
in the morning,
hell, like making love at night,
at noon,
damn,
any time,
the way he feels inside,
that hard slow pace,
then the faster...
oh man,
how about when he just stops?
how that makes...
stop it!
enough already!
get some sleep!
then again,
I could just roll over
and wake him up,
mmm ... love at 2 a.m.
maybe then
I can get some sleep.
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
6/11/2011 |
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So can relate to the right reason/s for being sleepless. Love this, CJ. Love and best wishes,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
6/9/2011 |
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| Breathtaking indeed sweet lady...sighhh.....stay safe and well..Hugsss |
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| Reviewed by Kathryn drkathy2@cs.com |
10/8/2006 |
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Wonderful, sensuous poem. I can relate. Takes me right there (in my mind).
Beautiful.
Thanks for welcoming me to this community.
Kathy |
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| Reviewed by A PAX |
10/8/2006 |
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A lusty and domestic sharing here
thoughts to the lullabye of the snore lol
pax A |
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| Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader) |
10/7/2006 |
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Gloriously beautiful--
Love,
Dove |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
10/7/2006 |
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You naughty girl!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks |
10/7/2006 |
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Mmmmm...some tantilizing, delicious thoughts. Now, I just turn on the light and try to read myself back to sleep :o) Downright enchanting change-of-pace in your poetry!
Micke |
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| Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader) |
10/7/2006 |
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| Hope, for your sake, he woke up. Happy dreams, JC. Victor |
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| Reviewed by Peter Paton |
10/7/2006 |
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CJ
I can't think of a better way to fall asleep..;-)
Cheers
Peter |
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| Reviewed by Phillip William Allen |
10/7/2006 |
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| Great pen on midnight frustrations. Enjoyed |
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| Reviewed by Denise Contreras |
10/7/2006 |
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Another example of your talent.
Thanks Hugs Angela |
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| Reviewed by Rusty Daily |
10/7/2006 |
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| She's funny, she's sensuous, she's titillating in all manner of human emotions. She's CJ Heck, the poet and this is another example of her enormous talent. WOW!!! |
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