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Surreal
by Saberi Roy

Monday, October 01, 2007
Rated "G" by the Author.
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fig leaves crumbling.....


 


 


 

Fig leaves crumbling
under flickering side streetlights
the sweat of brow
surreptitious like a snake shedding skin
on its way to destiny
counting the drops of rain
the kettle smokes the room
the window half open
like the eyelids.
drenched streets lone
between shadows
dim darkness humming
nighttunes
A pain inside and the
blood feels torn
the breath loosens slowly
in drips.
 

 
 

 
I am between reals
testing limits of pulled time.

 

 

 

 

 

Copyright - Saberi Roy, October 2007
 

 

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Reviewed by Amor Sabor 1/20/2008
Fantastic images congregated in the back of my mind as I read your words.
Amor
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader) 10/5/2007
Excellent work! Holly
Reviewed by Axilea MU 10/5/2007
Some surreal imagery indeed, like a painting that speaks to the senses, though, rather than directly to the intellect.

The two lines that end your poem make me think of the reflections on time (and space) and the recent evolution of these concepts.

I have enjoyed your poetry.

Axilea
Reviewed by John Leko 10/3/2007
...as if to be sung...with jazz like quality...rich tones in these words...each phrased with individuality...coming together.
on the edge...
John
Reviewed by E T Waldron 10/2/2007
You test the limits so well Saberi keeping your reader engaged with bated breath to see where you're taking us next! Kudo's!

Love,
Eileen
Reviewed by blue soplain 10/1/2007
something in this reminds me of a Edvard Munch painting; all sinew and rawness. . .. a slight bit off in its ethe/r.eality. ..
i love it. ..
especially the dangling spaces in between. ..
ness
Reviewed by Art Sun 10/1/2007
This is one of those poems that leaves the reader grasping for your thoughts, wishing to complete the depth with an analysis of each line...and then it is all defined.....Surreal...


nice work....




Art Sun...
Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury 10/1/2007
I really enjoy the images that you often project. Here is what I felt when I read your beautiful lines.

The innocence of humanity has been worn away,
Lightened by side streets that detour man in a mindless stupor;
As working has become their reward for unshackled chaos.
While peoples characters have become reversible as rain coated serpents,
With clouds of darkened future leaving a window sash parted slightly to vent the gain;
Cleansing of streets with muddy ichors drainings.
As the crickets and tree frogs sing of natures nightime refrain,
Gathering the subterfuge of a lost humanities identity;
Whose pain has been numbed by lost bloodlines haste.
With breathless exhaustion slowly peeling back the raw drippings,
Charted by a Nanoreel imploded by infinite space.

Reviewed by William Bonilla 10/1/2007
A really Kool profound piecec Sabrie
Loved the cadence
Love & Peace

William
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 10/1/2007
Shades of the beat poets of the 1950s, this one shrieked out at you in black and white and stark realism . . . That realism is what makes this better than most of the beats . . . Very good . . .



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