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| Reviewed by Diana Wiles |
4/2/2008 |
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| Perfectly delectable..! Love, Diana |
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| Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse |
3/29/2008 |
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It Is So True! We all have felt that feeling like no-one has ever felt it before :) So True....ahh my memories
Ok Bring Me A Freshly Baked Waffle Cone With Chocolate dipped & Ice Cream Also Dipped-Yum!...ok I don't have your Fabulous Spot Here, so Dairy Queen has to work for me
I Loved Your Deliciousness Write! I felt like Prom Night, Or My First Kiss :)
Embraced~Embrasse'
Vickie |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
3/27/2008 |
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A sweet write Bernice, thank you for sharing.
Newfie Hugs, Rose |
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| Reviewed by Connie Faust |
3/27/2008 |
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A charming picture of tentative teenage love, sweetened by delectable dessert.
Connie |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper |
3/27/2008 |
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| delicious poetry, got my sweet buds flowing and I'm convinced that I have felt this way before |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
3/27/2008 |
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uhuh.....been there done that...........but now that I am old...chocolates gives me those teenage pimples instead of that awesome feeling!!
Thanks for your visit to the blond.....got to see my darkside too...lol!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
3/27/2008 |
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| To say this is short and sweet is a complete understatement, Bernice. There is such power in your lines and you have sketched the outline for a whole novel and given us an introduction to two characters who intrigue and to whom we can relate in just so few words. A taster here that whets the appetite for more of your work. Thank you, Kate xx |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
3/27/2008 |
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Bernice,
Very romantic and I'll take a half dozen of those desserts too. (lol)
Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul. |
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| Reviewed by Cryssa C |
3/27/2008 |
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Ah...! I love this! The picture looks simply scrumptious too!
Cryssa |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
3/27/2008 |
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Your photograph is mouth watering delicious, making me hungry for something sweet again! And the two shall spend an afternoon in bliss....
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by John Leko |
3/27/2008 |
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...words...finding heart of the matter...in something sweet...baked...in tones of mochas music...a connection.
excellent Bernice...
John |
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| Reviewed by Charlie |
3/27/2008 |
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| That is a decadent morsel of romance. --Charlie |
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