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| Reviewed by Ann Marquette |
5/1/2008 |
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| Lovely... |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
5/1/2008 |
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Too use those words is to commit the heart and that is an expensive gift to give. All too often I hear it lately thrown about as common as saying hello and althouth I agree we should never fail to let people know how much we care...to say "I love you" should always be special. Very lovely write dear Bernice...enjoyed.
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
5/1/2008 |
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Fantastic! Love the wisdom in your simplicity!
ET |
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| Reviewed by Shedding Light |
5/1/2008 |
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I love it. Two thumbs up !!!
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper |
5/1/2008 |
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Can I borrow one of those forks, I'm hungry. My plastic one broke. I was trying to stick it into a tough piece of breakfast steak, my mistake. Anyway your verse holds much water, it would even hold the Atlantic, minus the sharks, they really make me frantic, of course I'm a verse addict, to read you I'd swim the Atlantic, the Red Sea, fight a bumble bee, jump the in the Pacific, still feeling terrific,
smiles&have a nice day |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
5/1/2008 |
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Your words speak loud and clear Bernice and they speak soft and lovely, Thank you for sharing.
Newfie hugs, Rose |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
5/1/2008 |
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| Beautiful writing sweet lady..have a wonderful and safe day...Hugs |
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| Reviewed by Cryssa C |
5/1/2008 |
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I love the depth of your poetry, Bernice! What a way with words you have...
Love the accompanying photo too!
Cryssa :~)
Hope all is well with your dad! |
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| Reviewed by Robert Wilson (Reader) |
5/1/2008 |
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| very apt photograph for your poem. words are like the prongs (tongues) of the forks. forked tongues. maybe another language already exists. as you describe so well, beyond words. |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
5/1/2008 |
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| Very nice!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
5/1/2008 |
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Bernice,
We can search a lifetime for just the right words. Too much time is wasted looking when simplicity says it all. Peace, Love and God's Blessings Always, Paul. |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
5/1/2008 |
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Like entwined fingers, don't need words to tell us what feelings are there, flowing back and forth.
Georg |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Anderson |
5/1/2008 |
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| This is beautiful...and the photo,perfect! |
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| Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks |
4/30/2008 |
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Beautiful simplicity in your words of deep love, Bernice! And the photo is great, too!
Blessings and Love ~~ Micke |
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