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You Color Me Red
by Bernice Angoh Lakota

Thursday, June 11, 2009
Rated "G" by the Author.
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When you said my name
 and held my hand
when you touched my face
 and kissed my lips
when you told all your friends
that I was your girlfriend
and that I may be the one
when you called me late at night
to say goodnight for the one hundredth time
when you went down on one knee
with that ring you made by yourself
when I said yes, when we said I do
when you carried our daughter in your arms
and saw me in her eyes
when you stayed
even when it was easier to let go
when you saw my flaws
and called them beautiful
when you say my name today
and it feels like the first time
when you touch my face
and kiss my lips...

Copyright © 2009 Bernice Angoh Lakota

 

 

 

 

 

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Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse 7/26/2009
I am with Richard on this, this is so tender & moving
& this is love...when love can see us in all lights of life...and still see our beauty, it is priceless feeling
Love & Inspirations
Vickie
Reviewed by Richard Orey 7/13/2009
Only one who is truly loved and knows it can write with such a romantic touch it brings tears to my eyes with its tenderness.

Hey, any man who can do this to you is definitely a "keeper."

I love it, Bernice!

Richard
Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper 6/18/2009
sounds like love my dear, which you do verse very well, cheers
Reviewed by Charlie 6/15/2009
You're beautiful. It shows in everything you write.

As always, your lines breathe love into us all. --Charlie
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) 6/14/2009
Oh my,Breath taking sweet lady...stay safe and well...Hugsss
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 6/12/2009
Truly beautiful sentiments well-expressed via your verses, Bernice. Would that such were so for all relationships. Love and blessings,

Regis
Reviewed by Cathlene Sares (Reader) 6/12/2009
Bernice,
This one ranks right up there with the rest.
Uniquely you! Can't wait to read the book :)
Love you,
Auntie Cathy
Reviewed by William Bonilla 6/12/2009
An absolutely beautiful poetry
very romantic
Love & peace be with you

William
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 6/12/2009
Beautiful write and I love the piccy! Well done, Bernice; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw) 6/12/2009
Hi Bernice, I would be blushing, too! :) What a great pen of love that doesn't end.... thank you for sharing this...

In Spirit,
Bear
Reviewed by Cryssa C 6/12/2009
And the list could continue on... That is what I love about the way you ended the poem...or began :~) depending upon how you look at it.

Cryssa
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson 6/12/2009
Breathtakingly beautiful, Bernice.
Reviewed by Liana Margiva 6/12/2009
BEAUTIFUL, VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by George Carroll 6/11/2009
Ah how love has blossomed and happiness abounds.
Reviewed by Paul Berube 6/11/2009
Very, very nice Bernice. Well done my friend.
Reviewed by . . 6/11/2009
He call one hundred times. He say his love many times. This poem is a beautiful poem about real love. The man telling his woman about love is very good. You write so very well, form, structure and feeling. A poem minus and problems.
A rose and no thorns is a true wife. Beautiful.
Reviewed by Ann Marquette 6/11/2009
Lovely Bernice
Reviewed by John Flanagan 6/11/2009
Bernice,
An ode to real love, true and lasting; this is delightful and warms the heart and soul.
John
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 6/11/2009
Just dripping with heartfelt passions....

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by Felix Perry 6/11/2009
You captured the beauty of true and everlasting love in this one Bernice and with lines such as number nine about saying good night a hundred times and line thirteen about carrying your daughter and seeing you in her eyes, say sooooooo much. Beautiful poetry.

hugs
fee



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