|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|an excellent write Bernice
most enjoyable reading
love your picture
Is that the latest snow fall in Georgia?????
Love & peace be with you
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|LOVELY!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|your play, can't call it work cause you're having too much fun doing it, is always a true pleasure to read. It is truly noble of you to even give the impossible love a stage and great verse to ponder this situation over with, cheers|
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|Clever writing, Bernice!|
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Oh what a beautiful photograph, so peaceful and serene as is what I think is a dream as the alarm clock runs interference...
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|I like in particular, Bernice, how this poem moves from the abstract and general to the personal and tangible..."stand on your feet, head against your white comfy sweater.."
the warmth is real (before the clock!)
|Reviewed by Ann Marquette
|So clever and cute.
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Very well done, Bernice. Nicely done with a little humor to close.|