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assemble
by Debby J Rosenberg
Monday, July 12, 2004
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i’ve heard said, in the eyes of god
a soul is perfect
whole and complete

it is mankind that distorts it

a vision while in non thought
a young boy with dark hair and
prominent ears

seeing only the face and neck
i observed as he split
lengthwise into 7 or 8 pieces

these pieces shuffled
altering the image
eyes wider and then closer

an ear in the middle
a nose to the side
endeavoring to assemble its self

like a puzzle continually shifting

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Reviewed by Peter Paton	11/30/2004

You make everything crystal clear in this intuitive and compassionate poem ...Debby... You have such a good heart and soul... Peter




Reviewed by Dawn Richerson	7/12/2004

Debby, wonderful poem!




Reviewed by jude forese	7/12/2004

our souls are perfect ... it is our minds and their self-image that distorts us ... awesome poem!




Reviewed by Tinka Boukes	7/12/2004

Wow Well done Debby!! Love Tinka




Reviewed by E T Waldron	7/12/2004

Well done Debby! Creator sees us through His own perfection! That's the glory of His mercy!Aren't we blessed that it isn't through our own eyes that distort everything?;-)

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