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| Reviewed by Dawn Richerson |
11/7/2005 |
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| Deb, good to read your work again. this poem draws me in with the flowing language that seems to twist and turn like Autumn leaves in the wind; it is as alive as the heightened season itself. btw, thanks for stopping by my den as well. Dawn |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
11/7/2005 |
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A beautiful ode to a beautiful season. Thank you for sharing this gift, Debby. Love and peace to you.
Regis |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
11/7/2005 |
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Great write Love it
love the Fall season
so much to write about it
thanks for sharing
William .....Love & Peace |
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| Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic |
11/6/2005 |
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beautiful work..
vesna :) |
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| Reviewed by Gordon Rosenberg |
11/6/2005 |
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| a lovely portrait of the energies of the rise & fall, returning me to that magical moment (smile) |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
11/6/2005 |
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| Taking the time to slowly and deliberately watch nature often produces fine poems, and this truly is one of them, Debby. |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
11/6/2005 |
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Most beautiful imagery in this lovely poem!!
Well done!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
11/5/2005 |
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Sweet wrote Deb amd the colour combined with this greaphic and your wonderful flow of magic words is a joy to read.
Felix |
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| Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green |
11/5/2005 |
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Glorious. You have captured the feeling I stopped to breathe in
as I was walking back up the hill from the mailbox this afternoon.
Lime and lemon and gold was peeking at me from behing the house,
and the pale orange-wine of the dogwoods. . .uh, oh. See what you started? I feel a fall poem coming on, too! Probably suffer by
comparison, but that's okay. October is wonderful, isn't it?
T h a n k y o u !! 'Pea' <3 |
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| Reviewed by Leland Waldrip |
11/5/2005 |
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Beautiful imagery, Debby. I like the way this runs to the reds.
Best regards,
Leland |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
11/5/2005 |
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| luv the images flowing into each other ... made the experience vivid and most stimulating ... |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
11/5/2005 |
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| I always wished for a pen such as this, to be able to grasp the loviness of simple nature and to give it a live other than it's own. I hardly ever attempt it, it is embarrasing when I do. I surely liked this. |
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