|Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
|Ahhhhhh. . .what a gem you have created, Debbie. All kinds of subtle colors in it. Tiny but mighty comes to mind. Sex-seeeeeee! <3 Phyllis <3 -- PS: Have a fabulous Christmas and an even brighter New Year!!!|
|Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson
|VERY SENSUOUS!...go Debbie go.......M|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Few words that have a powerful impact on the reader. Well done, Debby. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by D Johnson
|The writing is as mesmerizing as the graphic, both quite enticing.
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|More than persuation it sound like a tender cajoling to the little flame to become a roaring fire...
|Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
|Gentle persuasion is an art which you have captured, exquisitely!
God bless you. Kathy
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|A sensually pleasing glimpse in the split of a second at desire opening up in a mind.
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|a beautiful write as well a photo to match|
|Reviewed by Walt Hardester
|Much passion and emotion in few words. Well done.
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|well, this certainly got my bottom lip trembling, at any rate... whoever's doing the biting, this is mighty persuasive stuff. You have captured the foreplay to a deep and sustained kiss with cool aplomb here, Debby. xx|
|Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER
|Most sensues and inviting, waiting for fulfillment! Jasmin Horst|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Very nice feeling when I read these lines, Debby, hope shines! Anything possible - well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, karla.