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| Reviewed by Cryssa C |
3/18/2008 |
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The form of this poem lends freedom and air to your words...helping the reader to see beyond the confines of ordinary labels. The words are so true...thought-provoking write!
Cryssa |
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
3/16/2008 |
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| I like the setup of this write. What does define us..? Many many things me thinks......M |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Mead |
3/13/2008 |
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| I like this, it really makes you stop and ponder the statements it makes. The picture is wonderful, too. |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
3/12/2008 |
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| Ab-so-lutely. 100% agree... but identity is STILL a big issue which we struggle to get to grips with... like shifting sand. All the things you name in this poem are like the hooks on our person to which we attach and attribute importance and descriptors for our sense of being. We know in our hearts, I think, that the who and what we are is much more elusive than that; we can only recognise it when it is somehow reflected in something/someone else... and then we know love... for self and others. Inspirational, Debby, thanks. Kate xx |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
3/11/2008 |
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| Yes, the tent that our spirit dwells in is riddled with anomalies. Superb ponderations, almost Zen-like in nature. |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
3/11/2008 |
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First the words, after...the video, like the words more, they come out stronger.
Your quill are an inspirated one.
Georg |
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| Reviewed by Diana Wiles |
3/11/2008 |
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So we are left with the Spiritual....This is a mind expanding piece, that leaves me with a feeling of great freedom, relief and spiritual expansiveness..an almost scary feeling of our own power beyond the physical.
Loved the video too. So impressive as a whole concept..Love, Diana. |
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| Reviewed by John Leko |
3/10/2008 |
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...defines...is beyond definition...an open door...and your poetry and video...light in darkness. Here the pupil finds a rainbow of learning...in another's eyes...his own.
excellent Debby...
John |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
3/10/2008 |
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Excellant!
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| Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER |
3/10/2008 |
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We should realize that every moment there is, is you, is us, is all,
very nice video to highlight your poem, enjoyed it much, very enriching! Bless You! Jasmin Horst |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
3/10/2008 |
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| We seem to have similar thoughts lately!;-) Debby I love the video, it is fantastic,and brings home the message even more powerfully! |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
3/10/2008 |
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You are who you choose to be, what you choose to strive for and let no one stand in your way....
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis |
3/10/2008 |
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| True words resonating despite the human inclination to conquer through labels...... |
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