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  immortal creature
by Debby & Gordon Rosenberg
Monday, June 16, 2008
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immortal creature
so easy to lose oneself
amongst the daydreams
of this sphere
to walk in the footprints
of thoughts before you
perfection fixated
beauty intoxicating
they did well,
the predecessors
artistic sculptors of form
still here, they ethereally
whisper ideals
shine beams of light
and weave contemplation
reminders of humbleness
standing in a pillar of white
glowing edges of blue
golden orbs disperse
in infinite supply
from the heart of my humanness
creating an atmosphere
of compassion
surrounding our global existence

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Reviewed by Jill curry (Reader) 8/12/2008
beautiful imagery here ..loved it
Reviewed by Ken Chartrand 7/30/2008
Hello Debby, I read your poem,"immortal creature" Yes 'some have entertained angels'someone once said.Very beautiful imagery. Please feel free to visit my site here in the "Den"
Reviewed by Art Sun 7/27/2008
Nice work...the etheral energy of existence never leaves, it stays for the usage of our only has to understand why it exists...

nice work, Debby...

Art Sun...
Reviewed by Joyce Bowling 7/12/2008
Wonderful write, powerful imagery...beautifully written and inspiring indeed! Well done!
Joyce B.
Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green 7/5/2008
..."to walk in the footprints of thoughts before you. . ." LOVE it!!
AND the images you paint Nice rhythm and sound combo, as well! Plus youchose a great way to illustrate the piece -- gorgeous colors weave beautifully into "pillar of white, glowing edges of blue, golden
orbs. . .' Very tasty! <3 'Pea' <3
Reviewed by John Leko 7/5/2008
...wonderful words and images you pen...always transport us...a journey of the soul...seen through the human heart...and something more.
Reviewed by richard cederberg 6/29/2008
The spiritual longing in this drips like moisture in a cave
Reviewed by Mary Grace Patterson 6/19/2008
Stuble, the quality of being human opens many horizans. You have captured much with this beautiful poem....M
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 6/18/2008
Love the first stanza especially. Your karmic being always swells within your words to leave us with far more than the mere lingering of idea or sentiment. I love the way you inhabit your concepts and ideas. Bless you, Kate xx
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 6/18/2008
I love the way you share your "worlds" via your verses, Debby. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,

Reviewed by Felix Perry 6/18/2008
Like a magic carpet ride through a world of vibrancy and dreams you weave this story into something special. Your writes always set the mind/heart to spinning with images from another place.
Reviewed by E T Waldron 6/17/2008
I love the realms you take us to with your splendid poems Debby!Beautifully written! ET
Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen 6/17/2008
ah, nicely done, debby. if only we could all just focus on embracing our humanness...
beautifully inspired write.
Reviewed by D Johnson 6/17/2008
I was about to say the same thing Gianetta we'll leave it there.

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis 6/17/2008
I always look forward to your posts. It feels like being transported to a different place, yet one that is not unfamiliar. Rather, it is a place from where we were all strewn and where we might, once again, find home.
Reviewed by Lois Christensen 6/17/2008
Golden orbs disperse to everyone, as I know yellow cheers and is so bright. This is a brightly shining poem and I agree with George in the eternity beyond the eternity.
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 6/17/2008
"...glowing edges of blue..." like standing on the sky's end feeling the elation when the eyes see forever, the eternity beyond the eternity...then is when the creature knows its own immortality.
A brilliant poem!

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 6/16/2008
How soothing and appealing to the true sprit of the soul as one ponders the greatness and vastness of being human....

Be always safe,
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