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| Reviewed by Michael Guy |
2/10/2009 |
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Well that first stanza belongs in everybody's book for sure. Somehow this is a world where everything is turned inside out and we have to rightly reverse it for ourselves. And your idea of "angels" is leaps & bounds ahead of most - from your book no doubt...
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
2/3/2009 |
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| Very succinct and articulate encapsulation of very complex thoughts and thinking, Debby. Inspiring to say the least! Yes, all of our needs and wants and the who-we-are are answered from the without within and the within without. It's the ability to harness it, perhaps, that is crucial. Makes me think of harnessing the wind, somehow. xx |
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| Reviewed by Theresa Koch |
2/1/2009 |
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| This is truly a wonderful piece~`* |
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
1/31/2009 |
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| To look into innerself is sometimes hard to do. We get so caught up in the surface things , Its difficult to see beyond them. There is a higher level of consciousness which many seek to obtain ....Good poem....M |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
1/25/2009 |
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| it is true, even a second on pure enlightenment has a life-long effect ... excellent work, Debby ... really like the voicing and direction you took this poem through ... |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
1/24/2009 |
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| so well worded--love the perspective and wisdom! |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
1/24/2009 |
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I find this a most apt, timely, and meaningful write, Debby. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Love and best wishes,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by H Cruz |
1/24/2009 |
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| One would hope this were the case but reality is unfortunatly ego based |
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| Reviewed by Carin Spirit |
1/24/2009 |
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This is absolutely beautiful 'you are inside the consciousness' making for Oneness in the UNIverse. So many ways to see love. Thank you for sharing this one. Warmth and Love to you. Carin'
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| Reviewed by Linda Law |
1/24/2009 |
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| Your creative way of saying things is well done in this piece. You've touched what we sometimes feel within... hugs, lindalaw |
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| Reviewed by D Johnson |
1/24/2009 |
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Debby, this is a profound piece of writing. Nice work.
Cheers,
Dan |
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| Reviewed by Stan Law (aka Stanislaw Kapuscinski) |
1/24/2009 |
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| Do you really have such sparks in your eyes? |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
1/24/2009 |
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Very deep and sensitive, touching at feelings and emotions that we all have even if we don't always acknowlege them. Nicely done Debby.
hugs
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| Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis |
1/24/2009 |
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| Purely perfect thoughts. I love every word and have written very similar verses. I particularly like "you are inside the consciousness" and "finding ecstatic bliss, if even for an instant." I have experienced this bliss and it is not constant as the human lids of suppression tend to drive it down eventually, but when experienced it inspires and motivates one to move forward in faith - to progress toward potentiality fulfilled "gaining momentum" like a flywheel. |
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| Reviewed by Art Sun |
1/24/2009 |
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Interestingly written thoughts Debby, as the world spins so the knowledge is exposed, there is a flow of the universe that brings us into the depth of thought where we find all that we wish to know..
nice work..
Art Sun... |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
1/24/2009 |
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An alert heart will always fend the perils, and would "...continue its work at the time of changing ages..." Superb!
Georg
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| Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines |
1/24/2009 |
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I have always known that, somewhere, there was a girl with those blinking eyes. Still searching. I love this line "inside is outside flipped upside down" -- which is very very close to my own idea of God/universe/me (oops, got serious, there). Well done, Debby :-)
Ted |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
1/24/2009 |
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You give such enlighten ment Debby! Your oversoul is
powerful!
Thanks for your comment, I agree with you and I love the clarity
in your answer! As you know most arguements are from people who can't understand how those who are good all their lives,and someone like Sal, confesses in the last minute and goes to heaven;-)
Eileen |
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