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Saturday, January 24, 2009
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self-question the consciousness within
and find the consciousness is not inside you
you are inside the consciousness
uni-verse instantly becomes the multi-verse
inside is outside flipped upside down
something attempts to be known
instantly immersed from all directions
is the overwhelming external conscious
human perspective thinking the
thoughts of angels
finding ecstatic bliss, if even for an instant
rallys the heart to continue its work
as the time of the changing of the ages
is well enmeshed upon us
and quickly gaining momentum

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Reviewed by Michael Guy 2/10/2009
Well that first stanza belongs in everybody's book for sure. Somehow this is a world where everything is turned inside out and we have to rightly reverse it for ourselves. And your idea of "angels" is leaps & bounds ahead of most - from your book no doubt...
Later, michael
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 2/3/2009
Very succinct and articulate encapsulation of very complex thoughts and thinking, Debby. Inspiring to say the least! Yes, all of our needs and wants and the who-we-are are answered from the without within and the within without. It's the ability to harness it, perhaps, that is crucial. Makes me think of harnessing the wind, somehow. xx
Reviewed by Theresa Koch 2/1/2009
This is truly a wonderful piece~`*
Reviewed by Mary Grace Patterson 1/31/2009
To look into innerself is sometimes hard to do. We get so caught up in the surface things , Its difficult to see beyond them. There is a higher level of consciousness which many seek to obtain ....Good poem....M
Reviewed by jude forese 1/25/2009
it is true, even a second on pure enlightenment has a life-long effect ... excellent work, Debby ... really like the voicing and direction you took this poem through ...
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 1/24/2009
so well worded--love the perspective and wisdom!
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 1/24/2009
I find this a most apt, timely, and meaningful write, Debby. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Love and best wishes,

Reviewed by H Cruz 1/24/2009
One would hope this were the case but reality is unfortunatly ego based
Reviewed by Carin Spirit 1/24/2009
This is absolutely beautiful 'you are inside the consciousness' making for Oneness in the UNIverse. So many ways to see love. Thank you for sharing this one. Warmth and Love to you. Carin'

Reviewed by Linda Law 1/24/2009
Your creative way of saying things is well done in this piece. You've touched what we sometimes feel within... hugs, lindalaw
Reviewed by D Johnson 1/24/2009
Debby, this is a profound piece of writing. Nice work.

Reviewed by Stan Law (aka Stanislaw Kapuscinski) 1/24/2009
Do you really have such sparks in your eyes?
Reviewed by Felix Perry 1/24/2009
Very deep and sensitive, touching at feelings and emotions that we all have even if we don't always acknowlege them. Nicely done Debby.
Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis 1/24/2009
Purely perfect thoughts. I love every word and have written very similar verses. I particularly like "you are inside the consciousness" and "finding ecstatic bliss, if even for an instant." I have experienced this bliss and it is not constant as the human lids of suppression tend to drive it down eventually, but when experienced it inspires and motivates one to move forward in faith - to progress toward potentiality fulfilled "gaining momentum" like a flywheel.
Reviewed by Art Sun 1/24/2009
Interestingly written thoughts Debby, as the world spins so the knowledge is exposed, there is a flow of the universe that brings us into the depth of thought where we find all that we wish to know..

nice work..

Art Sun...
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 1/24/2009
An alert heart will always fend the perils, and would "...continue its work at the time of changing ages..." Superb!


Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines 1/24/2009
I have always known that, somewhere, there was a girl with those blinking eyes. Still searching. I love this line "inside is outside flipped upside down" -- which is very very close to my own idea of God/universe/me (oops, got serious, there). Well done, Debby :-)

Reviewed by E T Waldron 1/24/2009
You give such enlighten ment Debby! Your oversoul is

Thanks for your comment, I agree with you and I love the clarity
in your answer! As you know most arguements are from people who can't understand how those who are good all their lives,and someone like Sal, confesses in the last minute and goes to heaven;-)

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