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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
5/31/2009 |
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| Powerful and a look at that which many do not realize or see..Well said !.....M |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
5/26/2009 |
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| a unique and riveting memorial poem ... |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
5/26/2009 |
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Very touching and heartwrenching at how much one must endure....
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
5/26/2009 |
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| "now, she unrecognises herself"... I love the way you give us such a fresh and original verb here, Debby. This is fabulous writing that describes a myriad of actions and emotions together in one melting pot. A deeply grieving and grievous situation shared by many who live their life actually and metaphorically in shadows. xx |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
5/26/2009 |
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Oh, Debby - this is powerfully penned sadness - my Uncle Duke (deceased now, Daddy's brother) was a survivor of Bataan. He was 6'2" tall, about 180 pounds when he went in service - when he was liberated three and a half years later, he weighed 82 pounds. He'd never talk about it - he kept his scars, both external and internal, hidden until the day he died - thank you for honoring those who suffered at the hand of the enemy. And they call us beasts. :(
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. *tears* |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
5/26/2009 |
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Some continue to be inside prisoners of themselves.
Agonizing poem talking of an agonizing soul.
Georg
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
5/26/2009 |
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| i love the depth of feeling here-well written. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
5/26/2009 |
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You truly put us into the head of your character and made us feel the scars of pain so long impeded into her body and soul. This is one that is definately publishable and I think it would also serve as a reminder to all that soldiers are not the only victims of war...
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
5/26/2009 |
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Beautifully written poem,excellent work,take care
EDWIN |
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