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flint
by Debby J Rosenberg
Friday, June 12, 2009
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*image - spinning woman (it's not a trick, just a gif image...your brain does the work)

What direction is she spinning?
clockwise - you are using your right brain (creative)
counter clockwise - you are using your left brain (logic)

Whole brain - control her direction

as I place my palm upon your chest

a beam of light ignites

the inner spark

and connection to

the stardust of galaxies

energy tingles the fingertips

as a warm blush slides down the core

the mind rests and the heart beats

in syncopation to the grander scale

instantly the breath inhales

behind the eyes is brilliant sight

a trip it seems of outer worlds

dreamed from inner dimension

lift your wings its time to fly

swirled beyond reality

where creation is the living landscape

shaped by intuition

the quickening of our conscious time

opens up the portals

turn the fabric on its side

and flip it right side up

energy emanates from your heart

I feel the pulse and waves of passion

like an ember beneath my palm

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Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson	7/10/2009

I tried to see her going clockwise and could not. What a unique and clever write and picture....M




Reviewed by richard cederberg	6/15/2009

"energy emanates from your heart" Yes it does Deb, I agree. And what inhabits the heart always determines the essential quality of what exudes from it. Out of the abundance of the heart the mouth speaks. Great insight and a lovely image. The female form, i believe, is one of Gods most beautiful creations. Blessings ...




Reviewed by The Bear Paw	6/15/2009

Hi Debby, how very interesting... I try, too, to see her spinning counter-clockwise, but I cannot. This write is so reflective.. thank you for sharing... In Spirit, Bear




Reviewed by L. Figgins	6/14/2009

Beautiful write--soft visions of light from the hands of a healer. You are blessed and bless others with the gift of touch and insight... Lin(spins both ways)




Reviewed by Michael Guy	6/14/2009

I'm hard-wired to clockwise for some reason. But your poetry (and I've been reading quite a bit sitting by my window with my tea lately) SPNS in multi-dimensional directions and always asks some of the most incisive and intriguing questions. Not intellectual but intuitive perception... (oh I meant to read those) Next time, mike




Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan	6/14/2009

very interesting!




Reviewed by jude forese	6/13/2009

i have a hard time keeping her spinning in one direction ... supernal passion in a beautiful poem ...




Reviewed by Joyce Bowling	6/13/2009

A creative and intriguing write my friend, enjoyed this thought provoking write! Blessings from Ky. Joyce B.




Reviewed by Felix Perry	6/13/2009

Very intriquing Deb..love that graphic but the words align well with my own thoughts. Thank you for sharing. hugs Fee




Reviewed by Regis Auffray	6/13/2009

How interesting, Debby. I can only see here spinning clockwise no matter how hard I try to see her otherwise. You poem gives me good pause for reflection. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes to you, Regis




Reviewed by Walt Hardester	6/13/2009

I thouroughly enjoyed this trip into other realms. (I could change her direction, but it took some concentration)...Great Graphic Walt




Reviewed by D Johnson	6/13/2009

Absolutely excellent writing... this is my favorite verse. "energy tingles the fingertips as a warm blush slides down the core the mind rests and the heart beats in syncopation to the grander scale" Cheers, Dan




Reviewed by Georg Mateos	6/13/2009

...and she's going clock wise! But that's me. Georg




Reviewed by E T Waldron	6/12/2009

The exciting interaction between the elements and humanity added to spirituality gives us the 3 motivation factors,plus energy to explore creation! Superb Debby!...ET




Reviewed by Lori Moore	6/12/2009

Nice images.

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