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loose change
by Debby J Rosenberg
Sunday, September 13, 2009
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top photo is of the tumblebrush which arrived with its dozen cousins around the yard....


 

 

 

cool nights blushed the more delicate leaves

the daylight winds blew more than a breeze

delivering the tumbles of new season

 

unfinished thoughts dangled mid air

light years away I blinked

awaiting another awareness

 

seekers sat upon their alters

twisting the verbs introspective

some gave voice and sang more loudly

some held modifiers noiseless

 

I rarely give gentle

my way beyond summer  

grasping the moment of autumn’s loose change

 

laying on my back

looking up at the cloud line

somewhere between ceaseless and now

 

 

~summer and autumn are dancing~

 

 




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Reviewed by Stephanie Webb 10/29/2009
I love this!

Steph
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 9/20/2009
Clearly an inspired write, Debby. It is very apt and timely. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and best wishes,

Regis
Reviewed by D Johnson 9/17/2009
It is a sweet dance from one season to the other. Nicely written.

Cheers,
Dan
Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis 9/15/2009
"unfinished thoughts dangled mid air"; "somewhere between ceaseless and now" - what terrific lines! Consciousness evolving with you on its cusp - leading the way to expansion in every direction.



Reviewed by E T Waldron 9/15/2009
Summer and autumn were dancing! Love it! love this poem and the pics with it altogether a lovely feeling! Thanks Debby!
Reviewed by jude forese 9/15/2009
i was just lying on my back thinking similar things but not so poetically ... nice!
Reviewed by Felix Perry 9/14/2009
This is indeed one of my favorite seasons as I am not fond of the heat I love the cool breezes of the fall. Nice write indeed Debby...well done.
hugs
fee
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 9/14/2009
How beautifully you describe the changing of the guard...

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 9/14/2009
such a lovely write! love the photos as well
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 9/14/2009
"...unfinished thoughts dangling in mid air..." how a gentle way to say it and have the rest of the poem dangling from it!
Excellent!!!

Georg


Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle 9/14/2009
Great poem Debby.This is beautiful.I enjoy reading it,take care

EDWIN
Reviewed by Paul D Berube 9/14/2009
Nicely written, Debby.
Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope) 9/14/2009
Sweet! Summer will move over after the dance


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