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by Debby J Rosenberg
Tuesday, September 29, 2009
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This Mayan symbol is called the Galactic Butterfly which is said to represent all of the consciousness that has ever existed in this galaxy...

This prose piece briefly describes the sensation of receiving energy (nearly impossible to find a word expression) and tho similiar to a mature woman's hot flash...my husband experienced it too :)

This began about 2 am and lasted until dawn on Saturday night.


as the heat filled my entire being

with a blinding white light

I experienced the bliss and discomfort

of feeling melted within my core

as if my cellular structure sizzled

with energetic vibration

unaware, are the felines asleep

upon the foot of the bed

silenced in purrfect dreamlands

noticed by the occasional whiskers twitching

 

uncomfortably warmed this personal summer

seems to radiate from the heart center

I tossed and rolled  kicking off the sheets

get up, lay down

on my back, on my side

minutes became an hour then another

there is no pain only heat

intense heat

my calves cramp as I try to stretch

I get up then lay down

it is still night yet I see the

brightness of sunlight behind my eyes

am I awake or asleep

 

feeling every subtle nuance of sensation

upon my flesh tingling with discovery

my mind pulled inwards out of its mental realm

enclosed within the confines of physical structure

it is tight, suffocating, and surreal

to know this place and feel its existence

fully present and aware of the moment

then…dawn now peeking into the windows

it has been long laborious hours

sleep at last overcomes further analysis of the experience

 

~energetic heights of primal creation~

 

 

 

 




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Reviewed by Regis Auffray 10/23/2009
Thank you for sharing this fascinating experience, Debby. Love and best wishes,

Regis
Reviewed by E T Waldron 9/30/2009
totally mesmerizing,i am enrapt in your experience! Thank you for the this Debby!Sensational!
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® 9/30/2009
"fully present and aware of the moment" <- We should all strive to live in this way.

Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph
Reviewed by D Johnson 9/30/2009
Absolutely fascinating write, also loved the graphic.

Cheers,
Dan
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 9/30/2009
fascinating piece and experience
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 9/30/2009
The picture is more like a Maya representation of Yin-Yang or the other way around.
As the Universe as been for eons, man will be like a moth circling the flame of a candlelight.

Georg


Reviewed by Paul D Berube 9/30/2009
Quite the experience, Debby. Well described in your writing.
Reviewed by Dawn Wilson 9/29/2009
Something that I believe will remain with you in years to come.
Reviewed by jude forese 9/29/2009
i wonder what symbol expresses consciousness still evolving in the galaxy ... is it the same?

"energetic heights of primal creation" describes the essence of this poem ... vivid depiction ...
Reviewed by Felix Perry 9/29/2009
Indeed this is one experience that will stay with you for a long time to come...great descriptions of your surroundings and feelings as you experienced them...

fee


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