|Reviewed by Rafika Anderson (Reader)
|Great advice. Nicely delivered.|
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|To just be....I've thought and used this phrase often in my work...at times, it's simple....and at others, it's difficult. I think, there are times in life when we feel pushed to the limit, and when we want to toss in the towel...and I think it's okay to feel that way for a time...it's what we do next that's important. Yes, just be...but there are times when it's important to not only just be, but to move ahead. Beautifully written....your work is a true inspiration.|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|you are already enlightened
you are already all that is
you are already magnificent
I find your verses replete with meaningful wisdom and encouragement, Debby. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by D Johnson
|Perhaps, and I can be wrong here, but it would seem to me the first thing one must do to 'become' is to lose ego. Wise words.
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|ah, but revelation is the key!!! all our understanding is a locked box unless we are enlightened to the Truth which then releases the power from within. Here you equip us with the key to becoming. thank you! And personally, i believe The Spark is God! :)) xx|
|Reviewed by Sheri Uy
|This is a very inspiring and uplifting piece, Debby. I am one with you in the belief that we need not look and seek elsewhere for that glimpse of heaven because it is just within us, in our hearts where truth resides. Blessings to you. Thank you for sharing.
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|beautiful words of truth and inspiration|
|Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
|much wisdom scribed herein, debby.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|You are right Debby,but what defeats those who don't know it, is that they can't bring themselves to believe in this truth.so they don't "become" Hopefully your enlightened poem will help them experience the "Spark"!
|Reviewed by Inspire Hope
|This is a wonderful write Debby and very
inspiring too! God bless you and I am pleased
to meet you! Thanks for stopping by!
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
|I keep trying to become but this aging body keeps telling me that I am headed for death and a transition that is very dependant on the choices that I made in this life. Your work inspires thought Deddy. I hope that all is well.
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|"...is the truth that sets one free..." and in a world enshrouded in lies...truth is the only option...
|Reviewed by steve Chering
|A grand poem a grand picture and a grand poet!|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Sounds like great advise and one we should all explore fully...thanks for sharing your insight Deb.
|Reviewed by Gordon Rosenberg (Reader)
|yes, for those of us who recognize this it is a glorious journey indeed! I only hope all others do someday. nice write!|
|Reviewed by L. Figgins
|Just BE--the incredible miracle that you are and unique in the universe.
How can this be so hard, yet so simple? Because we take to heart the criticism we hear throughout our lives and our own negative self-talk that not only blocks our creativity but that precious "spark". Wonderful write, Debby, and very timely ;)! Blessings, Lin