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Debby J Rosenberg, click here
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within a fortress
i have a room
tasteful but simple
i collapse on the bed
too tired to even undress
waking early
i ventured the hall
and opened the door
to your room
noble you looked
sleeping there flaccid
thinking i'd rise you
with my watering mouth
you stirred in your sleep
muttering something
i did'nt quite get
what would you think
if i pounced upon you
pinning you down with
wild intention
would you respond in animal kind
with wanton need for affection
i salivate at the thought
you stir again
and kick off the sheet
exposing your form and surface
oh, i'd so like to touch
and intimate explore each delicate fold
taking my time to know all it holds
Tantric in its journey
tickled by the thought
i make a move forward
and reach to smooth my hair
i realize then i'd slept in my clothes
my hair is wind blown and sleep tangled
this won't do, how could you
when you love beauty and structure
and perhaps more behaved
so i retreat the door
in search of a bath
and think of the art of seduction
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| Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson |
9/7/2003 |
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| thank you for the stir, gets my blood flowing |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
9/7/2003 |
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| wonderful seduction indeed... |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
9/6/2003 |
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| Great write! |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
9/6/2003 |
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Imagery of erotica perfectly written!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
9/5/2003 |
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| Wow Debby, this is to me the epitome of classy erotica!Beautifully done! |
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| Reviewed by Amor Sabor |
9/5/2003 |
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You pronounced erotica perfectly in this write with full depth of poetic justice in mind. Beautifully done, Debby.
Amor |
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| Reviewed by Leland Waldrip |
9/5/2003 |
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| Nice romantic woulda coulda didn't. I enjoyed the imagery, Debby. |
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