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  within a fortress
by Debby J Rosenberg
Friday, September 05, 2003

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within a fortress
i have a room
tasteful but simple
i collapse on the bed
too tired to even undress

waking early
i ventured the hall
and opened the door
to your room

noble you looked
sleeping there flaccid
thinking i'd rise you
with my watering mouth

you stirred in your sleep
muttering something
i did'nt quite get

what would you think
if i pounced upon you
pinning you down with
wild intention
would you respond in animal kind
with wanton need for affection
i salivate at the thought

you stir again
and kick off the sheet
exposing your form and surface
oh, i'd so like to touch
and intimate explore each delicate fold
taking my time to know all it holds
Tantric in its journey

tickled by the thought
i make a move forward
and reach to smooth my hair
i realize then i'd slept in my clothes
my hair is wind blown and sleep tangled

this won't do, how could you
when you love beauty and structure
and perhaps more behaved

so i retreat the door
in search of a bath
and think of the art of seduction

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Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson 9/7/2003
thank you for the stir, gets my blood flowing
Reviewed by jude forese 9/7/2003
wonderful seduction indeed...
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 9/6/2003
Great write!
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 9/6/2003
Imagery of erotica perfectly written!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by E T Waldron 9/5/2003
Wow Debby, this is to me the epitome of classy erotica!Beautifully done!
Reviewed by Amor Sabor 9/5/2003
You pronounced erotica perfectly in this write with full depth of poetic justice in mind. Beautifully done, Debby.
Reviewed by Leland Waldrip 9/5/2003
Nice romantic woulda coulda didn't. I enjoyed the imagery, Debby.

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