|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was excellent Debra..and how about how the sun looks through those ashes, now that was weird..I loved this, outstanding poem, very deep,
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Wonderful write with thoughts to ponder Debby!!
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Extremely well crafted. Great write!|
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|I live in the northern part of the state in Sacramento and we have had our share of these firestorms from time to time but nothing like what Southern Calif is experiencing. So sad to see the loss but I am gladened when I see neighbor helping neighbor as strangers come closer together. Great write, Debby.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Wonderful write Debby, I'm in the northern part, by Sacramento , but I cried a lot today.|
|Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore
|amen to all of this. to live in cali right now is, as you say, a lesson in learning to be a 'good neighbor'. a friend of mine just told me about the sun and the moon and ashes falling out of the sky all day...a wonderful write, poet. thank you for sharing!|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|change is always essential when resurrecting oneself... very tight, profound verses...|