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| Reviewed by John Domino |
8/2/2009 |
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Very touching romantic poetry!
John Michael |
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| Reviewed by Basem Attiyat (Reader) |
6/25/2009 |
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The eyes are 'the windows of the soul' as they can send many different non-verbal signals.
Thank you it,s beautiful poem.
Basem
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| Reviewed by Gary Tenuta |
12/28/2007 |
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| Hi Ellen. I wanted to share with you my reaction to this poem. The poem consists of 10 lines. The first 9 lines were nothing special - and I don't mean that in a negative sense at all. Let me explain. They were perfectly fine, well written and they said what they were supposed to say. Then I got to the 10th and final line and I just lingered there for several moments - caught like a gnat in a spider's web - and nodded my head and went "Wow. Yes." The success of the whole poem is so neatly wrapped up in that oh-so-subtle but emotionally charged last line. It pulled the other 9 lines right down into it. I felt it. It reached me. It stirred up something familiar, somewhere inside me. I knew what that last line meant. What more can one ask of a poem? Nice work, Ellen. 5 stars! :-) |
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| Reviewed by Grant Mobielle |
12/27/2007 |
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| Wonderfully moving, deep, pointed. With these simple words, you eloquently display a beautiful passion which tugs at ones heart. |
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| Reviewed by Bernice Angoh |
12/19/2007 |
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| If only...nice one! |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
12/7/2007 |
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A compelling, soul-reaching plea, Ellen. Very moving. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Axilea Uzumcuoglu |
11/28/2007 |
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There is so much yo see for those who want to see, of course! Some can only see their own projections, transforming you into their object. How sad! But you have written lines that are made of honesty and simplicity, nicely done!
Axilea |
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| Reviewed by Kathy Armijo |
9/26/2007 |
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I hate carrying on a conversation with someone who won't look into my eyes, but then since I can't see their eyes - there's obviously nothing there for me.
Kathy |
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| Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill |
9/24/2007 |
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Ohh, it's so sad but yet hopeful. Beautiful, Ellen!
Your friend from Utah!
R~ |
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