|Reviewed by Wesley Simpson (Reader)
|Sherman was right "WAR IS ALL HELL", and yet as long as power corrupts, war is an answer. I like the end but mankind will never wake, but individuals can. keep writing!|
|Reviewed by Aled Fisher (Reader)
|Powerful and thought provoking. Being constructive, I think it shouldn't just be all one big block of text: some spacing would give it a great flow and would be easier to digest. Apart from that, brilliant!|
|Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon
|I agree with Peggy...this is very real and a very different climate from my fantasy world.
Great writing! ;) Silver
|Reviewed by Therese Kinkaide
|Hi Billy, I am also a new member at Darkstormy.com. This is very insightful and thought provoking. I am in the process of getting some of my stuff together to put out here. I have a page here at Authorsden, but I don't have anything here yet!