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| Reviewed by Jen Bennett |
3/7/2003 |
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| "my tattered wings..." beautiful imagery. yeah authorsden should have audio capability for poems put to music |
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| Reviewed by Mike Ill (Reader) |
3/6/2003 |
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| not bad, i just didn't go for some of yoour word choices but that's just my style. good job. |
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| Reviewed by Shelley |
3/6/2003 |
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great writing! Your point is blunt, and I would like it if you would check out my teen writing section, it is a great way to be published and heard. here is the url
http://heartswithsoul.com/goa-teens.htm
Best wishes.....Shelley |
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| Reviewed by Drkman |
3/5/2003 |
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Tim.
Funny how the relationships that are to bring such great joy to our lives can so complicate them. Hang in there it will get easier.
Drkman |
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| Reviewed by na na (Reader) |
3/5/2003 |
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Timothy, this is a powerful poem. Building from a simple position to now what has become a very complex relationship. Now you are where others like myself have gone;
to an area that changes our lives; leaving scars and teaching us what it means to love.
Bill |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
3/4/2003 |
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| as we rejuvenate ourselves everything falls in place... great tone of voice and powerful motif... |
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