|Reviewed by Jen Bennett
|"my tattered wings..." beautiful imagery. yeah authorsden should have audio capability for poems put to music|
|Reviewed by Mike Ill (Reader)
|not bad, i just didn't go for some of yoour word choices but that's just my style. good job.|
|Reviewed by Shelley
|great writing! Your point is blunt, and I would like it if you would check out my teen writing section, it is a great way to be published and heard. here is the url
|Reviewed by Drkman
Funny how the relationships that are to bring such great joy to our lives can so complicate them. Hang in there it will get easier.
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|Timothy, this is a powerful poem. Building from a simple position to now what has become a very complex relationship. Now you are where others like myself have gone;
to an area that changes our lives; leaving scars and teaching us what it means to love.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|as we rejuvenate ourselves everything falls in place... great tone of voice and powerful motif...|