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|Reviewed by Annali Allen (Reader)
|its a pain ful process and it sucks, so good luck. Keep writing it seems to make things feel better at least it dose for me.
|Reviewed by Drkman
|Interesting from Tim. How sadly true that many of us live life as you describe. We rebuild ourselves over and over so we can fall off track and into little pieces again. To bad we can never ride the train instead of the train wreck. Wonderflu write.
|Reviewed by A PAX
|ok...I am not trying to be funny....but I see an irony here....what you described in your poem, reminds me of what my son told me he went thru in marine boot camp...breaking down the old....to a NOTHING...then building from scratch.....lots of pain inbetween...self doubts, and kicking yourself for joining....but in the end...a build up to a new person
and I think thru poetry people can do that too.......
This is a good poem
its such a gift...we can give ourselves
and when we share it with others
its a blanket of trust!
ps I almost bought a house in Ringwood once!