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amalgamingle
by Dark Stranger

Friday, August 02, 2002

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we were silly kids skinny dippin
with our pretend clothes on
and each other's hands in our pockets

you were standing on my feet with yours
and we walked like one person bodies
you said the sun felt good on your back

and that you hoped no one was watching
but if they were you didn't really care
cause I was part of you now

and it felt right how we fit
with our feet and hearts and mouths
stuck together funny with glue

you said you didn't mind me being quiet
now that you knew I loved to listen to you
cause you had so much you always wanted to say

and you loved being my pretty tattoo

©Dark


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Reviewed by Aamie Burnley 8/4/2002
... hopefully we all remember someone from childhood whom we would have loved to adorn; i like this bunches.
Reviewed by Mari Laureano (Reader) 8/2/2002
soft, tender, youthful... almost innocent images (I said, ALMOST), LOL...lovely piece! **Mari**
Reviewed by a- maryllis 8/2/2002
I really enjoy your work, so mystical..

Reviewed by Amor Sabor 8/2/2002
Intense imagery Dark...crafted so well and magically projected.
Amor
Reviewed by Larry Skahill (Reader) 8/2/2002
very fun read
good job
vivid pictures
Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader) 8/2/2002
I can really see this one Very vididly
what a charming piece
Bravo!!!
Reviewed by Sandi Schraut 8/2/2002
Sensous and stirring! Sandi
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 8/2/2002
Stranger you have done it again, painted a lovely, sensual picture with just a few very well-chosen, surprising words. I'm still addicted to your work, but not anxious to kick the habit!
Reviewed by Masarat Daud (Reader) 8/2/2002
Wow..I really liked this one, especially the tattoo part! ;)
Reviewed by Tracey Hardie 8/2/2002
Dark... I have missed you.... good write!
Reviewed by Sailor Neptune 8/2/2002
This is image laden in mystic
verses and hidden words of a language so wonderful and presented well.
I enjoyed your talent.
"with pertend clothes on."
GC
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