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My Girl by David J Knight Saturday, March 09, 2002 Share Print Save Become a Fan She’s loving and forgiving Helpful in the task of living No matter how late the return No disapproval do I discern So beautiful is she to behold Yet instantly does as she is told No matter if at her I cuss and swear No grudge does she seem to bear Even if was I to raise my hand By my side she’d loyally stand No matter I come home drunk No problem, she’d share my bunk Her love comes with no conditions For she requires no provisions No matter others tempt my heart No one else could keep us apart So aware of my every word Yet herself so rarely heard No matter what my foolish folly Not to Aggie, my Border Collie.

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Reviewed by Sandra Mushi	7/18/2005

Great twist! Lol! I was beginning to wonder what kind of a woman is this? Darn! Then I remembered you had told me about the twist! Lovely poem and you're one lucky man to have such a loving girl, David. Lol! God bless, Sandie.




Reviewed by Brittany Renée	12/30/2002

Wow, what a twist! LoL. For a human, or a dog, that would be very sweet, though a bit abusive to a human,...well for a dog, too. I love these twisting poems. I just read one like that by somebody else, Linda, it was. Quite good, yours. Threw me off. I liked this style a lot too. It seems to fit you best. Warm Love and Happy New Year, Brittany




Reviewed by Robin Labenberg	3/18/2002

one hand dog--one hand man hhmmm balancing the two I can't decide..smile




Reviewed by Lori Moore	3/12/2002

Dogs are so wonderful. We could all learn from them.




Reviewed by William Manchee	3/10/2002

So true. Dogs are great.




Reviewed by E T Waldron	3/9/2002

Knew it couldn't be a woman not in todays world...;-)nice write...




Reviewed by Sage Largo (Reader)	3/9/2002

Animals are about the only place you can get such unconditional love. Thanks for the chuckle Sage




Reviewed by J John (Reader)	3/9/2002

this made me chuckle .... maybe i should trade the wife in lol