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Barrage by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse Thursday, March 20, 2008 Rated "G" by the Author. Share Print Save Become a Fan Deceptive Love Is A Barrage Of Forked Truths

Photography Artist: http://larajade.deviantart.com/ Barrage Heathen of the jungle; Stalk your hearts felt prey. Slither into the scull; Words forsaken everyday… Paynim held chameleon of venomous phantom’s disguise; Starvation of a rapscallion bring deceptions of demise… Within your jaws murky darkness you’re steeping under lamb’s hooved wool; Haunting in your paved betrayals in need of a hunger's solitary fool… Who has lain into this vagrant within truths silent forage; Where only you remain hidden within hearts lonely barrage? (Written: March 8^th, 2008 7:50 p/m) Copyright© 2008 Vickie L. McColley *In Joy, In Peace, In Grace, In Harmony of Love* Embraced ~Embrassé
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Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain	11/29/2008

Vickie, Un enclos qui plonge dans un tout nouveau domaine poétique - écrit par un maître et brillant esprit. . . superbe!! Hugs, Lance




Reviewed by Regis Auffray	3/22/2008

Stark and harsh and thusly, effective, Vickie. Thank you. Love and hugs and best wishes, Regis




Reviewed by Samuel Stone	3/20/2008

Vickie Verses to ponder upon where deep truth lie within one's perceptive eye... well done... Sam




Reviewed by Karen Palumbo	3/20/2008

Deep and dark as the inner workings of the mind, yet vividly clear.... Be always safe, Karen




Reviewed by Bernice Angoh	3/20/2008

Oh my! I was frightened for sure. "...steeping under lambs wool" now that is a scarry disguise for the innocent hearts




Reviewed by Mr. Ed	3/20/2008

A barrage of forked truths, to which many have succumbed.




Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart	3/20/2008

Darkly delicious!




Reviewed by Felix Perry	3/20/2008

"you're steeping under lambs wool..." This says it all Vick, we cannot especially when blinded by love see the evil that we think is our invitation to heavenly bliss. Well written and so true. hugs Fee




Reviewed by Paul Berube	3/20/2008

Vickie, Excellent write. I was expecting to be pounced upon at any moment. Loathesome and sly is the stalker while the prey awakens to his awareness. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.