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Breathing As One
by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Wednesday, June 04, 2008
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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Breathing As One

Your skin glows

like a fire fly luminating the nectarine blossoms

of spring’s sensational delight.

Scents of softness escape

into the gentle breeze

as the delicate orchid opens

 into the purest of promises

kissed by the purity of hope.

Your angelic voice sings

 to the clouds of divinity

like a song bird whispering

for my heart to follow

the calling of your name.

The dusk of evening floats

like a lost feather;

cascading the bounty of comforts

as I carry memories into the twilight

of moon beams caress.









of the magnificent sapphires,


and mystical serenity of love

to become one with you…

welcoming the night of the universe.









I am filled with devotion


that I may now dry all tears of sorrow;

for in the quiet of timelessness…

Our star was secretly drenched with a celestial kiss,

leaving me within this beauty

to listen for the last heartbeat of this day…









into the echoes of our closure’s embrace…


Into…the pearls of moonlight

I stand in peacefulness within the open nimbus

like the snow cap mountains

so that we may breath as one,

kindred to our unity as chest to chest,

heart to heart,

soul to soul,


breathing as one within the grace of love forevermore…




(Written: May 20th, 2008 6:15 a/m)


In Joy, In Peace, In Grace, In Harmony of Love

Embraced ~ Embrassé

poétesse d'amour ~ poétesse romantique

Copyright© 2008 Vickie L. McColley







I am blessed to know it’s your heart that I hear beating


Holding our memories treasure… next to my heart,


I rest my heart within eternity’s search


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Reviewed by dan Rosenhagen 10/6/2009
Heart to heart
soul to soul
face to face

'Twas written in my own hand
in"Sand and Soul", now I see it here.
They say that great minds think alike,
but in this case it is "Old Souls"
sharing their insight. :)

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain 12/1/2008
Hello Vickie,

Loved this immensely, especially -

"cascading the bounty of comforts

as I carry memories into the twilight"



Reviewed by Regis Auffray 8/20/2008
Thank you for sharing this gift, Vickie. Love you lots,

Reviewed by Richard Orey 6/17/2008
"As the delicate orchid opens into the purest of promises... breathing as one within the grace of love..."

Dreaming of such soulful and sensual beauty, I lose myself in the ecstasy of my young lover's sweet embrace.

"Richard! Wake up! Vickie wants to know what you think about 'Breathing As One.'"

"Later, please! I'm busy right now. I mean, really busy!"

Yeah, I don't ever wanna wake up from this.

Fabulous work, Vickie.

Reviewed by Katie Gabrielle 6/12/2008
stunning visual poetry makes the reader experience your heart and soul and joy through this beautiful, free spirited poetry! Keep being you and never afraid to feel and touch and live
Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle 6/8/2008
I love the way that you play with words and create such fantastic,vivid imagery.This poem is absolutely amazing.

Reviewed by Bernice Lakota 6/6/2008
This took my breath away! Incredible and absolutely beautiful piece and that picture, ah!
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 6/5/2008
Don't breath until you are up there, among the stars and take a deep one, inhaling the universe's fragrance where all is new, or old, growing or dying, but that its worth to have touched our heat.
What about a kiss like a passing comet promising to come back?

Reviewed by Rose Rideout 6/5/2008
This is beautiful Vicky I had to read it the second time as my breathing slowed down some. Love dwells in every word. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie hugs, Rose
Reviewed by H Cruz 6/4/2008
Fine poem! ;)
Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater 6/4/2008
Passion just flows so natural in this piece...I don't mind promoting this author at all...this poetry will never go out of style..never abandon this genre, would be like telling Mozart to switch to well you...

Reviewed by Morning Star 6/4/2008
Awesome love this poem
your words captured the beauty of love
and becoming one soul
one breath
one beating heart
Brilliant and romantic!!
Peace Love and light...and hugessss too...Morning star
Reviewed by Jon Willey 6/4/2008
This will leave you breathless for sure. Great poem God bless. JMW
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 6/4/2008
This is such an amazing poem..I am so touched by it. I especially cannot tell you how much these lines make my heart flutter:

"Our star was secretly drenched with a celestial kiss,
leaving me within this beauty
to listen for the last heartbeat of this day…
I am blessed to know it’s your heart that I hear beating
into the echoes of our closure’s embrace…"

You are simply Romantically inclined!!!
Much peace, love, and light to you,
Amber "Vivianna"
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 6/4/2008
A truly amazing piece with expressions of love that far surpass the emotional realities.....

Be always safe,
Reviewed by Felix Perry 6/4/2008
Catching my breath on this one for to breathe as one with you would be a paradise of sweet passion. You write your heart and desire out in your poetry and the man who is the recipiant of this should know how much he is blessed...

Reviewed by Gene Williamson 6/4/2008
Breathing as One, Victoria, leaves us...breathless. - Gene.
Reviewed by William DeVault 6/4/2008
Very nice. Beautiful flow and aspect. Stirring.

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