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To Kneel and Amend
by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
Tuesday, July 01, 2008
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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Come To The Lord's Alter

To Kneel and Amend

I was silence
At one time
A whisper in your ear
The thought of an idea
The call of visions unclear

I came to you in the quiet medleys
The gallant might of moon beams shone
Across the empyrical sky through infinity
There the froth of sunrise rose

Beyond the canyons of all desperations
Within the caverns of secret's burrow lain
The mass of shadows fortune arose the thunder
offering me to pour out the sacrisity of rain

A meager self wrought giver
Through the son of a thousand men
Beneath this grave of sorrow's grievance
I call upon your soul to kneel and amend


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Reviewed by Regis Auffray 7/15/2008
Sad write that grabs the soul of the reader. Love and hugs to you, Vickie,

Reviewed by Jill curry (Reader) 7/8/2008
outstanding poem..
Reviewed by Debra Baker 7/3/2008
This poem cry out in madden hour heartache. Written with such intense expression. A winner...........
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader) 7/3/2008
Exceptionally written! Love Holly
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 7/1/2008
Written with such raw emotion, yet very gentle, wonderful piece...

Be always safe,
Reviewed by Rose Rideout 7/1/2008
Strongly felt with the heart Vicky. Your words never disappoint us. thank you for sharing.

Newfie hugs, Rose
Reviewed by H Cruz 7/1/2008
Reviewed by Jon Willey 7/1/2008
One of the best I've read of yours. And you have written many excellent poems. May peace be always with you. JMW
Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle 7/1/2008
I love reading your poems and this is one of them.I love how you let your words flow freely and naturally.The picture is amazing.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 7/1/2008
Victoria, I love this poem, it is so eloquently written, and the picture simply stunning..Nice job my dear.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Reviewed by Gene Williamson 7/1/2008
This is one of your best, Victoria, despite the pain, the tears.
I especially love the first three lines. -gene.
Reviewed by Felix Perry 7/1/2008
The longing and ache in this one reaches out and squeezes the heart of the reader till we can feel the pain of it all. Very intense Vick and bleeding like an open wound.


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