by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
Thursday, July 08, 2010
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scarves of emotional deception revealing
porn from the depths of his desirous soul
came forth these intimate bounty of words
smooth as warm sensual balms anointing
sweet as nectarous wild berries
saturant nectars and fruits of fertile desires
as heated oils spread saturating trusts throughout faith
offering emotional seduction dripping with passion flowers
from the honey fields of wild clover & the moon pearls of love
floating as zephyr perfumes caressing with tender emollients
releasing the soul of love's heart into erotic expression
liberating the tired minds of broken dreams & betrayed promises
pouring to rim with wet lips speaking loving sacristies
he overfilled her every need yearning with devote beckon
and then...without a moments notice...it happened...
she fell...deeply...into her own well of realizations
as his mask of blindfolding truths were revealed...
(Written: July 7th, 2010 6:25 p/m)
© Poetess Victoria L. McColley
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|Reviewed by Dark Knight
|Reviewed by Jon Willey
|Vickie, I am led to places within my imagination that I have never before been. Are those the "pourn places of your desirous soul"? Your writing evolution continues and delivers ever more beautiful poetry my dear friend. Now pour me just a cup, of the "from the desirous depths of your literary soul". I need a transfusion of impetus. May peace and love be always with you. Jon Michael|
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|I believe this is where we say love is often blind and then we see through the mask. Great write as usual Vickie.
Your Newfie Friend, Hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
|Tell the wizard of Oz the curtain is transparent, unless of course you like the journey. Patrick|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|I love this new style and format you are using and this the third I read today is no exception to the quality of your work Vic...nicely done friend.
|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|Victoria, I lose myself again in your unique and
always imaginative language, and I yearn to be pourn
from the depths of YOUR desirous soul. -gene.
|Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill
|Good for "her!" I was overcome with your seducing words, like honey poured over my body. AND then...awoke with a start, grasping and pulling at the blindfold!
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Wonderfully written Vicki~ down, down, down, until she gets her bearings and comes back up much stronger and wiser, yet a bit more than ticked off!
Been there ~
|Reviewed by D Johnson
|There in lies the dilemma of broken hearts... one must always keep the blinders off, and the eyes; the soul train to your heart, wide open. Nice write.