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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
7/16/2010 |
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| Vickie, relativity is a powerful force. Each of us have been leveraged at some time in our life due to the relativity of a social perspective. At any moment in time prior to that, we would not have been under its influence. Some of us dare to oppose the accepted values of the day and time. Others cling fiercely to the norms. You poetically explore those circumstances in your poem. "trusting our all empowering instincts" is most probably the right path. May peace and love be always with you my dear friend. Jon Michel |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
7/10/2010 |
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Keep them coming Vickie. This is great.
Newfie Hugs, Rose |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
7/10/2010 |
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Victoria,
You have such power in your pen..I can say that I have been a victim, I have been deceived and I have been the hunted.
There are many predators out there, and women especially need to be very cautious and savvy. We must protect ourselves and our children, no matter what.
Our heart and soul knows the truth about everything, we much listen for the clues and warnings..Our minds will protect us till the end.
Amazing poetry!
Much peace, love and light,
Amber |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
7/9/2010 |
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| EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader) |
7/8/2010 |
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| This is amazing! One of your best. A different side of you...philosopher/ poetess. |
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| Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill |
7/8/2010 |
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Wow! I get the feeling I might not be one of the collective "we" here, but this work still resonates within me. Great write Vickie!
Peace,
Dayvid |
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| Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater |
7/8/2010 |
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With powerful intention and affirmation of social blunder, you're in control with each line, Victoria...you're a victim as well as others of us which has had an ongoing emotional impact for years on all of our lives...I'm too emotional now to go on...
Love,
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
7/8/2010 |
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Brilliant! This poem is incredibly powerful in wisdom and metaphor ~ so many layers, so many vantage points to every choice in life ~ and we just can't be spared from the web which includes others who are deceptive, even if we ourselves try to become released~
Blessings,
Christine
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
7/8/2010 |
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As a man who was a hunter in past I will say that for those who hunt and actually eat what they kill I have respect. I put my weapons away a long time ago but know if the circumstances called for it my skills would return and allow me to do what was needed. I do not like the modern style of hunting where baits, tree stands, scented trails etc for there is no skill in that only out and out deceit and murder. I really enjoyed this write and the methaphors and similees that you included in it Vic, well done.
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