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Commanding You
by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
Saturday, October 30, 2010
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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Commanding You

Darkling of vampiric hungers
Your throat I’ll gingerly seek
To crawl all over your body
Licking your thong and cheek

Don’t call it disgusting
I know what you adore
Man handled by a woman
Begging with whips for more

Stand before these three mirrors
Watch the reflections of lust
Tasting the pearls of passion
Depths throat it is an absolute must

Oh sorry for the intrusive invasion
These thoughts get carried away
While I take you with these wristlets
Commanding you come what may…

© Poetess Victoria L. McColley

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Reviewed by David cox 11/1/2010
wow ! that was something else that raises the temperature
depths throat it is an absulute must.
my mind is racing you are a very erotic writer, and i love evry wod you write.
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 10/30/2010
wowa..this is powerfully spell it~
Reviewed by Jon Willey 10/30/2010
Halloween dark and passion far from meek. You may continue to command me Vickie. A marvelous treat without any trick(?). Love and peace to you my dear friend. Jon Michael
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 10/30/2010
Like the sun glasses! Hmmm, now we are getting into the holiday spirit...

Be always safe,
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 10/30/2010
Wow, I am is so erotic it makes me want to commandeer someone...

Great work, as always, poetess

Peace, love and light,
Reviewed by Felix Perry 10/30/2010
...and so begins all Hallowed Eve
Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater 10/30/2010

Reviewed by Richard King 10/30/2010
WOW!!! Forget Halloween! Bring it on. Seriously though Vicky, This is really well done.... Like it a lot. It's almost as nice as the book covers you've designed for us. Dick

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