POETICA: Subtle Morsel
by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
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the reality of truth's existence...
Across The Efflorescent Skyway
I joined you across the efflorescent skyway
The empyrean ideals of thoughts and
The majesty of the moment
Or was it the priceless offering I seen
This emotional debt of gratitude
That wavered about the silvery elms with intangibility
As I held tightly to the sacred messengers
Those soft words spoken
Deep inside the emotional quake
Were only quietude consumes meaning
And the truth of tenderness that lives forevermore
Awakens As a subtle morsel of rekindled wanting
Knowing their own reflections are truthful
And the grievous lost souls are outstretching from their sorrows
Buried by their needs to believe in true love
where the unification of their twin soul dies
Consumed by the reality of truth’s existence…
© Poetry by: Victoria L. McColley
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|Reviewed by Jon Willey
|Vickie, as usual I enjoy your recitations - and this "Subtle Morsel" is no exception - "this emotional debt of gratitude that wavered about the silvery elms with intangibility as I held tightly to the sacred messengers" is a marvelous poem within a poem - I wish you love and peace my dear friend - Jon Michael|
|Reviewed by dan Rosenhagen
|I love the mixture of sensuality blending with realistic events of sorrow and even the notions of the loss of hope, where I one can lose themselves in their own sorrow.
Great write Vickie
peace and love forever
|Reviewed by D. Vegas
|Victoria, If it was a perfect world we would not be in the predicament that we are in...I think we all find our own truths eventually...sometimes they are very hard to swallow---truthfulness!
|Reviewed by David cox
|love it, it's beeen a long time since you have done a recitation, i could listen to your voice for hours, more please.
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|unfortunately, Vickie, can't access this one
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|My plugged ears prevented me from hearing the gist of your poem. It be nice if you could post the words as well.
|Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
|and forever more a soul melding into a cosmic twinship. what is the shape of truth? a sphere? truth coagulates and sets us free tangibly recognizable in circular vibes emitted by the messengers...a rite of passage held sacred and scrutinized by none if...if it was a perfect world with no jealousies and pain...deliverance justifies existence for those souls like us who are a cut above the mold and christ-like in power...