|Reviewed by m j hollingshead
|i like this|
|Reviewed by R Beeman
|An excellent comparison of the stroke of the brush and the stroke of the pen. Each one puts our lives on paper.
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Indeed, as soon as the subcon takes over, one writes almost instinctively...
Nice one Dawn.…
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|An outstanding write Dawn
Love & Peace be with you
|Reviewed by Art Sun
|The picture can be the same it is only a difference of brush or pen...poets and painters can take one to where there are no limits...very nice, Dawn...
enjoyed, Art Sun...
|Reviewed by E. Richardson
|what a lovely quatrain this is! I love short verse, their brevity and power and this piece is a perfect example of that. Excellent in every way here.|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Reviewed by David Thompson
|I was just thinking how the poet can paint a picture with words and cause even the blind to see. This is such a splendid write, Dawn.
|Reviewed by L Hippler
|"Both blending radiance and shadow attempting to find the right hue."
Great line, Dawn.
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|beautiful description of what writers aspire to acheive|
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Where the magic begins.....
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|This has a calmness to it,,just that right touch,, Well Penned!|
|Reviewed by Darrell and Kathy Adams
|Oh, Bravo! The combination of the picture and the poem are so suggestive of a significant even of creation. The mood and anticipation builds even in such few lines. Very well done indeed!
be well and happy,
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|You captured the poet's desire to offer his best in each and every writer...whether they be comdedic, dramatic, horror or erotica we strive always for just the perfect lines. Well said Dawn, enjoyed.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|You convey the concept of "art" very effectively in this succinct but powerful creation, Dawn. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|Isn't that the beautiful thing about writing!
I enjoyed this very sweet and short vision that
touches on so much of a poets purpose. Thanks
for sharing this, Dawn! :)
|Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
|Now that's a Masterpiece if I ever saw one! :)
Love and Peace~
|Reviewed by Axilea MU
|The last three words express so much about the process of writing.
|Reviewed by Cryssa C
|I love this...
So succinctly and beautifully said!
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|I loved this one, Dawn! Very well penned! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by F William Broome
|Your enjoyable words fall on agreeing ears.
This poem is proof that all it takes are simple words.
It's the kind of writing that makes us go back and read, again...
fearing that we've missed something even more meaningful. - Bill
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Beautifully artistic verse - well penned, Dawn!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Donna Quesinberry
|both blending radiance and shadow attempting to find the right hue
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|It could only have been said thusly, Dawn . . . To say that true poets are artists is as natural as taking the next breath . . . Pooets paint with words, which make it all the more difficult to make themselves understood . . . Unlike those who pain, poets must paint their scenes and words inside the reader, to get close to their psyche, not merely their visionary sense . . . Very nicely done, poet . . .|
|Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis
|I love this...beautiful!|