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Once Upon a Time
by Dawn Anderson

Sunday, May 25, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Once, in a distant

Memory lived mirth and love,

Although slowly they

Vanished – nary a trace – as

All things left unattended.

 

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Reviewed by Sheila Roy 10/7/2009
This one goes deep, Dawn. It makes me think of a miser growing old alone. Great Tanka. Hugs,
Sheila
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen 6/7/2008
You certainly have a gifted pen, thank you for sharing
God Bless
Michelle~
Reviewed by William Bonilla 5/31/2008
Your thoughts say so much
with so few selective words
Brilliant composing
Love & Peace be with you

William
Reviewed by Cryssa C 5/30/2008
You are amazing, Dawn!
Simply superb writing...
Cryssa
Reviewed by Art Sun 5/26/2008
Nice work Dawn....unattended love can vanish as your thoughts so well express...a very nice expression of thought through poetry...

enjoyed...

Art Sun...
Reviewed by John Leko 5/26/2008
...expressive poetry...given just the moment of few words...holds all the time in the world.
this is excellent Dawn...
John
Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER 5/26/2008
This be no fairy tale, but real, you said it with charm, and nourishing wisdom, Blessings! Jasmin Horst
Reviewed by E T Waldron 5/26/2008
You have such keen perception Dawn! excellent sad poem!...ET
Reviewed by Gene Williamson 5/26/2008
Well done, Dawn. You captured a life in five good lines. - Gene.
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 5/26/2008
i agree-the last line sums things up very well-nice job
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 5/26/2008
Last line is the kicker . . . What reality is for many people you have captured it here in poetryland . . .
Reviewed by Felix Perry 5/26/2008
Excellant tanka that captures and says so much about live and love. So many good relationships have perished because they were not nourished by both partners. Well done.
hugs
Fee
Reviewed by Bernice Lakota 5/26/2008
Stunning write...as usual.
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 5/26/2008
SO much said Dawn,,,Excellent.
Reviewed by Liana Margiva 5/26/2008
NICE!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Rose Rideout 5/26/2008
You have said a lot withing those lines. Memories can vanish when left unattended. Thank you for sharing Dawn.

Newfie Hugs, Rose
Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper 5/26/2008
A melancholy write, and the last sentence caps the thought perfectly. People often get too complacent in a relationship and all the romance seems to fade into oblivion.
Reviewed by F William Broome 5/26/2008
Yours are haunting words in a look back.

Mystery creeps in, and we wonder about events absorbed by time.

Your brief works continue to be well done

- Bill




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