|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Ah, this comes from a more serious place. I, too, have lost beautful babies, the dream, the names I so lovingly chose, the music I played to my growing boy or girl. Five times I screamed 'Oh, God, no not this one!'.
|Reviewed by JMS Bell
|I DON'T OFTEN TEAR UP OVER A WORK...BUT, I UNDERSTAND YOUR FEELINGS SO COMPLETELY THAT IT IS IMPOSSIBLE FOR ME NOT TO. THANK GOD FOR MEMORIES...AND FOR STRENGTHENED WOMEN THAT, DESPITE THE PAIN, CAN CARRY AND SPEAK OF THEM SO WELL. GOD BLESS YOU, MY FRIEND AND PEACE...UNTIL YOU SEE HIM AGAIN. MUCH LOVE, JOYCE|
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! VERY SAD........... Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Wish I could ease the pain.
So glad you write. For someone like you or I, there is no better
survival tool. Helps you to work your way through the bad and
relive the good.
You have done almost too good a job. Hard not to burst into tears.
Seize the day. . .and keep paper and pen handy.
|Reviewed by The Poetess
|This pain your motherly heart it beautifully expressed.|
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
|Simple heartfelt persuasion - a clear glimpse into your heart!
|Reviewed by Paul Judges
|Beautifully done, Dawn.
Thank you for your comments.
|Reviewed by Southern Comfort
|A beautiful and touching Love Offering for your son. The sadness, longing and pain reaches out and touches the reader. SC|
|Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis
|So moving; so heartwrenching. I do not want to imagine the pain; I cannot allow myself to 'go there.' Yet, I feel for you so deeply. You are a gifted woman and I pray that your gift of expression helps in some way to sustain you and bring you some peace. You're in my heart.|
|Reviewed by Cryssa C
|This left tears in my eyes, Dawn... The ache of a mother's heart who can't hold her boy in her arms...I know that ache all too well.
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|Excellently written heartfelt Piece
Peace & love be with you
|Reviewed by Ed J.
|A very touching write.
|Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
|Dawn, this is such a heart-rending write. I feel your love and your pain; and yet, it's the kind of feelings we have for our children constantly. We love them, want to protect them, want to forever have them close. Blessings to you.|
|Reviewed by John Leko
|...such love of the heart...found in these touching words...can only harbor light within the heart one so loved...so that he may always sail upon the safest sea...in return.
this is most beautiful poetry Dawn...
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|A mothers love is beyond compare,and the reunion with your boy will show his love returned to you in his eyes. Written with such eloquence, Dawn! Deeply touching!
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|A loss no matter in what form, is always so hard to bear. You have written words from the heart. In turn it is felt in my heart.
Much peace, love, and healing light to you dear friend,
|Reviewed by Mary Grace Patterson
|A Heartfelt offering of love. Sometimes its very hard to be away from some one we really care about....M|
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Dawn, My heart bleeds as I read this, I know your beautiful boy is so proud of you and safe in Gods arms, til one day your void will be filled.
Love and Prayers,
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|this so deeply touched me--beautiful and sad|
|Reviewed by Shedding Light
|What a dear and sincere poem !!!
Harold M. Nash
|Reviewed by L Hippler
|It's obvious this one comes right from your heart, Dawn.|
|Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
|this is tender, vulnerable and beautiful~|
|Reviewed by Linda Law
|Oh Dawn, I'm sure your beautiful boy will remain in your loving heart until reunited; however, until then....Keep writing and sharing the beauty that you have expressed in this writing. lindalaw|
|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|I am deeply moved by the deep love expressed so beautifully
in this poem, Dawn. One of the great blessings of your talent
is the knowledge that Alex lives on in your words as well as
your memory. -gene.
|Reviewed by Lois Christensen
|He's not lost in your heart. He will be there forever with you. Sorry about your loss.|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Dawn as a father my heart goes out to you for when we lose a child no matter if it is through death, anger or just distance and time a part of us never feels full again. Big hugscoming to you.
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|Thank you for sharing the love and pride of a mother for her beautiful son. Dawn this comes straight from your heart. Thank you.
Newfie Hugs, Rose