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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
12/3/2009 |
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SO INSPIRING...IS THIS DELICATE WORK OF FAITH THAT GENTLY POINTS ONE IN 'HIS' DIRECTION. ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
5/25/2009 |
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Just think on how and what they were feeling,
Those same feelings you felt when love was new to you
You wasn't intruding, you were remembering
Outstanding write
Love & peace be with you
William |
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| Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis |
5/9/2009 |
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| Beautiful glimpse of many to be had might we simply take the time to observe - keenly observe - within a deep sense of curiosity, kinship and appreciation. |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
5/1/2009 |
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| I, too, am privileged to bear witness to similar displays of love and faithfulness, Dawn, living on the edge of a bird reserve as I do. I, too, am touched by how universally bonding and harmonious our living world is. Thank you for this beautiful expression of it. Kate xx |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
5/1/2009 |
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It is refreshing to read such uplifting verses, Dawn. Thank you for sharing your gift. Love and blessings to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by David Hightower |
4/30/2009 |
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Dawn - Touching use of personification to point to the fact that there is more than we know...
Especially liked:
I smile at the beauty of what I have
witnessed, thankful for the splendor
that surrounds me.
- David |
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| Reviewed by J'nia Fowler |
4/28/2009 |
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| As it was meant to be. Lovely, thank you, J'nia |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace |
4/27/2009 |
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| Lovely writing sweet lady..well done indeed...stay safe and well..Hugss |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
4/26/2009 |
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Dawn,
This is a lovely write. It reminds me of the times I've watched the wild turkeys come through my yard. The way they cross a street fascinates me. Hugs,
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Axilea Uzumcuoglu |
4/26/2009 |
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Effective construction until the very last line.
And I can so relate to this poem
as I can picture myself feeling profound
happiness for having witnessed such meaningful beauty.
Axilea |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
4/26/2009 |
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Dawn, I love your poem, it speaks of love in the simple pleasures of life. Often I too watch nature, and am always in awe of it's beauty and simplicity.
Beautifully written,
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
4/24/2009 |
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its often in the commonplace occurrences that you can hear the voice of god ...
well done, DAwn ... |
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| Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson |
4/24/2009 |
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Beautiful images seen through eyes that truly see.
Allen |
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| Reviewed by Cynthia Buhain |
4/24/2009 |
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Beautiful Dawn, written well as "an intruder" - God's creatures give us more lessons than we can perceive, and observing them closely sometimes brings us closer to the One Who created them.
Cynthia |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
4/24/2009 |
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Dawn,
It's in the everyday that the magic is; waiting for (so-called) great moments is to miss the point and the true events. What you witnessed is beautiful and ordinary at the same time and that you shared it with us so thoughtfully and tenderly is wonderful. Thank you.
John |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
4/24/2009 |
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They say miracles happen everyday and I do believe this was one of them, beautiful....
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by L. Figgins |
4/24/2009 |
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| I watched two falcons circling each other, falling and then rising in a mating dance in the sky. It was like a ballet-beautiful. Yes, "...it is observing simple, everyday things that I can rest certain in a Power far greater than I." This write inspires faith in things unseen. Fine poem! Thank you, Dawn...Lin |
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| Reviewed by Barbara Henry |
4/24/2009 |
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Dawn,
This is a very moving poem,and I completely agree with you:Life's simple pleasures are the best.
Thanks for reminding me of this great truth.
Much syccess
Barbara Henry |
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| Reviewed by Ed J. |
4/24/2009 |
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Wonderfully pleasing poem. The poet of momnets strikes again.
stay well and keep writing
Ed |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
4/24/2009 |
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This is quite lovely, Dawn. So glad you caught
that one perfect moment. -gene |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
4/24/2009 |
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I concur, Dawn, one of your best. Absolutely gorgeous! Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by L Hippler |
4/24/2009 |
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Oh, Dawn, I loved this! I think this was one of your best ever.
Larry |
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| Reviewed by Dale Clark |
4/24/2009 |
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Awesome, Dawn, it's the beauty in life...
Great pen! |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
4/24/2009 |
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| Simply beautiful Dawn! |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
4/24/2009 |
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A great poem, about the simple thing of life that point us to small happening being part of a greater one.
Georg
PS. better that those birds don't fly over my newly washed car!
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
4/24/2009 |
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| A truly lovely poem, Dawn, and birds are truly wondrous creatures. |
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| Reviewed by Dallas D'Angelo-Gary |
4/24/2009 |
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| Amen! Very nicely done, Dawn! |
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper |
4/24/2009 |
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| I love your poem, Dawn. There truly are many beautiful things to be seen in nature and in the sky. The picture is a wonderful complement to your poem. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
4/24/2009 |
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| what a gift to have observed their sweet beauty--and your poem a gift to us! |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
4/24/2009 |
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Beautiful write and piccy, Dawn; well done! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
4/24/2009 |
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| How true Dawn and when we observe nature we see in it God's wonderful creation. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
4/24/2009 |
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Even for old Agnostics like me this simple beauty and worded truth hits home and reminds me that there is definately a greater power out there looking on. Thanks for sharing such an excellant poem.
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
4/24/2009 |
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| VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!! '...In one last kiss before spreading their wings in flight'---------I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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