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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
10/16/2009 |
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BRAVO! THANK YOU FOR SHARING THIS INSPIRING WORK. GOD BLESS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by John Domino |
8/24/2009 |
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| Wonderful! |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
8/9/2009 |
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This expresses so much, Dawn. Very well done. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
7/2/2009 |
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Very nice write.
Anna |
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| Reviewed by Bernice Angoh |
6/12/2009 |
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| Love this! |
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| Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis |
6/8/2009 |
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| Very nice in classic Wilson-style. |
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper |
6/5/2009 |
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| There is a lot of feeling and definitely "psychology" in this poem. Moving forward is an internal force of life and anything that holds one back is an obstacle. Well said, Dawn. |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
6/3/2009 |
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| Like a bolt between the eyes, Dawn. You nailed it. So many limp along in life, believing that it is the "right" thing to persevere when actually there is NO resolution, because the chemistry is all-wrong somehow. It's a bizarre thing when trying to do the best for the other (by honouring promises and entrenched commitments) becomes basically a slow-death of both, when the kindest and most fulfilling, honest thing would be to cut loose and set free. You paint such unyielding "failure" in stark colours here. May it lead many to "success". xx |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace |
6/3/2009 |
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| Very well said sweet lady..enjoyed very much...stay safe and well..Hugss |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
6/2/2009 |
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Dawn,
Your characters are so deeply intense. It's as if they come straight from a developed novel. Great message here. Hugs,
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
6/1/2009 |
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Unhappy thoughts occupy unhappy lives, better to cover the tears with a big smile.
Georg
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
5/31/2009 |
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Outstanding write dawn
I enjoy your wonderful poetic thoughts
Love & peace be with you
William |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
5/31/2009 |
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| if everyone would realize the theme of this poem, the world would be a better place ... |
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| Reviewed by J'nia Fowler |
5/31/2009 |
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| Well said. The wise soon discover that saying good-bye is the first step toward another second chance. Life is full of second chances if we just walk in faith. Well done my friend. J'nia |
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| Reviewed by Art Sun |
5/31/2009 |
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Dawn, this work gives us that view on moving forward through all life and relationships, it is at times frustrating and can keep one within a hold that only weighs down the soul...your expression of whispering a prayer to say goodbye to the past is where one can see that strength...
nice work...
art Sun... |
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| Reviewed by Dallas D'Angelo-Gary |
5/31/2009 |
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| Well said, Dawn! Sometimes goodbyes have to be said before the moving forward can really begin. |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
5/31/2009 |
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Life is too short to spend being unhappy.
Indeed, it is.
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
5/31/2009 |
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...and we grow because of it..such wisdom here Dawn, great poem!
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
5/31/2009 |
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| VERY NICE!!!!!!!!! I LIKE IT VERY MUCH!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
5/30/2009 |
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| a good and wise write-very well penned |
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| Reviewed by The Bear Paw |
5/30/2009 |
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Hi Dawn, There does come a time in everyone's life when there is no more time for childish games... thank you for sharing this strong write...
In Spirit,
Bear |
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| Reviewed by Ed J. |
5/30/2009 |
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Amzingly simple yet and the perfect example of self actualization and growth. Stay one step ahaed and strong.
Stay well and keep writing
Ed |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
5/30/2009 |
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Dawn,
The style stands out here, its directness, focus and expression in a poem of wisdom, emotional maturity and insight; right from beginning to end.
John |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
5/30/2009 |
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Dawn you nailed this one perfectly. We all I think reach a point in life and love where is enought is enough, enough excuese, enough fights, enough secrets and enough tears. Great write here for sure.
fee |
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| Reviewed by stan nassano |
5/30/2009 |
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sounds like your in a good place one stept ahead...nicely done,
stan |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
5/30/2009 |
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This is what I call wisdom with maturity! A fine poem
that gives us an example of going "One Step Ahead"
Love,
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
5/30/2009 |
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Such strength and wisdom in your words. It is time to move forward, one step at a time but ahead!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by Carin' Spirit |
5/30/2009 |
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| It is sad when growth leaves others behind. ...but it is, what it is. Still love your style Dawn. Warmth and Love to you. Carin' |
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| Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson |
5/30/2009 |
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As always your writing shines bright.Your style and use of words is pronounced...
Thus Dawn in this poem...the Prayers that are whispered gather amongst angels and on wings of hope touch the Heart of God..
Excellent writing...Allen |
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| Reviewed by Bill Broome |
5/30/2009 |
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| Your words are beautifully said, and are for each of us when we reach the end of a road. They are said as if a ring of having lived them. - Excellent decision making. - Bill |
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| Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford |
5/30/2009 |
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Wonderful poem Dawn. Here's hopeing you stay "one step ahead". It's the best place to be.
Hugs,
Marcia |
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| Reviewed by Cryssa C |
5/30/2009 |
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There is sadness, and acceptance, resolve, and soft joy written in these lines...
Cryssa |
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| Reviewed by Sandie May Angel-Joyce |
5/30/2009 |
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Dawn:
This poem is written so well. Its expression and the technique in storytelling is marvelous!!!!
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
5/30/2009 |
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Dawn, I applaud this poem and especially the following:
Life, she realized, is one and short –
too short to spend being unhappy.
What is...is.
-gene.
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
5/30/2009 |
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Oh, this is POWERFUL, Dawn. Beautifully penned and imaged!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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