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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
10/16/2009 |
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| SUMPTUOUS! I HAVE EATEN WELL, BEING FED WITH THE WHOLESOME, NUTRITOUS FOOD OF SUCCULENT ARTISTRY. THANK YOU, DAWN, FOR A MOST GRATIFYING MEAL AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Steve Chering |
9/28/2009 |
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Outstanding writer that you are..I could see a part 2 for this?
Hurry and write it? lol
Peace....steve |
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| Reviewed by Dallas D'Angelo-Gary |
9/16/2009 |
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| A still-shot of happiness. Well done, Dawn. I don't know how I missed this earlier. |
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| Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis |
9/15/2009 |
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| I agree with Axilea - this would make a wonderful introduction to a story. I felt completely drawn into this world, this experience. This is a new favorite of mine. I know that everything in your world appreciates your awareness - consciousness merging - you and "all." |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
9/12/2009 |
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Serene offering sis!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Mead |
9/10/2009 |
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| I was right there reading this, lol! I love to swim, but I have never swam in such a gorgeous place as you have described, but for the seconds reading this- I did. |
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| Reviewed by Bill Broome |
9/10/2009 |
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You've penned what we all would like to experience, and you've done it beautifully and sensuously making each of us deeply envious. Good writing, indeed. - Bill
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
9/10/2009 |
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Sounds like a refreshing moment to be one with nature. Excellent imagery here, Dawn!
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green |
9/9/2009 |
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| Wonderfully serene, and your images rock. Encore! Encore!! :) |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
9/9/2009 |
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| A lovely moment captured by your inner camera to keep and cherish! beautifully done, Dawn! |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
9/9/2009 |
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Oh boy, it sure sounds like you had a wonderful time with new memories made.....
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by David Hightower |
9/9/2009 |
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Dawn - Enjoyed the memory - I felt the warmth of the water with the moon looking down and the palms fluttering. Like the lines:
She drifted for several minutes,
allowing the wrinkles to smooth
from her mind
I felt my own mind relax.
-David
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| Reviewed by J'nia Fowler |
9/9/2009 |
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| Eloquent, joyful, and picturesque. Just lovely and I like the picture as well. Wish I were there. Hugs, J'nia |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
9/9/2009 |
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so lovely-i love the line: "...allowing the wrinkles to smooth
from her mind,"
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| Reviewed by Axilea Uzumcuoglu |
9/9/2009 |
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Lovely, refreshing description. It could also be the introduction to a story...
Axilea |
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| Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope) |
9/9/2009 |
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| After reading this a bubble of joy exploded inside me. thanks dear Dawn for the wonderful images you have captured in this extremely beautiful poem. |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
9/8/2009 |
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Dawn, breathtakingly beautiful. Spain must have been just as beautiful as your poetry.
Nice one!
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by Harold Nash |
9/8/2009 |
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Your work is very interesting!
Harold M. Nash |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
9/8/2009 |
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| Lucky ducky!!! :)) Spain is totally, TOTALLY magical! I have so missed your poetic inner dialogues and landscapes, Dawn, with their precision and tight grip on reality fused with longing. Your writing is therapy in itself. thank you for this. xx |
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| Reviewed by Dale Clark |
9/8/2009 |
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| Awesome pen, love it! |
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| Reviewed by L Hippler |
9/8/2009 |
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Dawn, I thought this was one of your best ever. "Allowing the wrinckles to smooth from her mind" -- wonderful line.
Larry |
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| Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford |
9/8/2009 |
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Totally wonderful poem Dawn. I especially like:
"allowing the wrinkles to smooth
from her mind, listening as the
palms fluttered in the breeze like
the wings of a hundred butterflies."
You evoked wonderful images.
I too have been to Spain and ever since have longed to return.
Peace and Love,
Marcia
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
9/8/2009 |
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Sounds like it was wonderful Dawn.
I, too, am moved by that line:
"allowing the wrinkles to smooth from her mind"
Hope all is well ...
Blessings ...
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
9/8/2009 |
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SO beautiful, Dawn - LOVED "allowing the wrinkles to smooth from her mind." =] Tranquility in these lines - well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
9/8/2009 |
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Seems to offer the same soothing feeling that the swimmer experienced..nicely done.
hugs
fee |
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| Reviewed by Cryssa C |
9/8/2009 |
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I love the line "allowing the wrinkles to smooth from her mind..." It is so poetic. :~)
I took a photo that is almost identical to yours last week, only it was taken in Montana in the evening, right before dusk. Funny how although we are half a world away, we can experience something so similar...
Cryssa |
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper |
9/8/2009 |
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| A beautiful write, Dawn. You create such a peaceful view as you turn on your back staring up at the moon. Those night swims make you feel at one with nature. |
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| Reviewed by Art Sun |
9/8/2009 |
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Nice poem Dawn...smoothing the wrinkles within the warmth of water...such a vacation is like the ectasy of life...
truly nice thoughts...
Art Sun... |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
9/8/2009 |
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| A lovely memory, indeed. |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
9/8/2009 |
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...such a beautiful feel to the body and soul...very beautiful!!...so glad you are back Dawn...you have been missed.
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
9/8/2009 |
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| BEAUTIFUL, VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
9/8/2009 |
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Oh! the poem that is the water caressing her body with its warmth and linger there, like a wet memory for gray times to come.
Georg
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
9/8/2009 |
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I imagined myself swimming along side and experiencing the joy of a relaxing swim as my mind painted the sky with its mental brushes with paint supplied by our creator. Welcome back
George
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
9/8/2009 |
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| I am honored when I am privilege to read such a lovely poem with its multi-layered meanings while the poem itself is kept simple in order to not confuse. The emotions you evoke are like colors of the rainbow, each blending into the other. |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
9/8/2009 |
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Dawn,
"...tucked away for a cloudy day" indeed as this poem is in my mind. You capture a simple moment, a pure act, with elegance and tenderness and underlying strength.
Welcome back!
John |
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