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| Reviewed by Ed J. |
9/26/2009 |
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I love this one as a universal realtion. I think everyone has that one love they will never forget and always wish to recapture that haunts them.
Stay well and keep writing
Ed |
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| Reviewed by Bernice Angoh |
9/25/2009 |
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| I love, love, love your work Dawn! I know I've said that so many times before, but when I read you after being away for a while, I realize how much I love reading your work. They are like mini-novels that give my heart a jolt but then they satisfy tremendously. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
9/22/2009 |
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when you don't appreciate what you have and then it's gone you lose part of yourself as well ...
very well written poem, Dawn ... |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
9/22/2009 |
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Haunting! Great work:)
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope) |
9/21/2009 |
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And when he awoke, he reached out to the
emptiness that surrounded him, whispering
her name, wondering why he so desperately
wanted what was no longer his.
Dawn to be frank with you, I have no words to comment on this poem. It blew me away
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| Reviewed by Carin' Spirit |
9/21/2009 |
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| Dreamy and soft... hindsight is a bugger. |
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| Reviewed by David Hightower |
9/21/2009 |
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| Dawn - I like the ambiguity of the ending of this poem. There are so many possibilities that the poem remains with the reader as he/she ponders the possibilities. - David |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
9/21/2009 |
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A powerful poem that grips the old heart. What agony to reach
for the hand that isn't there. One of your best, Dawn.
-gene. |
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| Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis |
9/21/2009 |
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| Soft and melancholy - the slow simmer of choices made. Lovely writing. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
9/21/2009 |
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As always Dawn you look into the soul of your character and display his or her heart to the world. As this poem suggests we often do things we pay for years later...
fee |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
9/21/2009 |
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| It is too bad we can't appreciate in the moment,,,a lesson in life indeed...beautiful poem Dawn |
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| Reviewed by L Hippler |
9/21/2009 |
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One many of us can relate to, Dawn.
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper |
9/21/2009 |
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| Nice poem, Dawn, and too often people want what they've already lost. Isn't it too bad that folks don't try harder to create harmony in a relationship. It takes just a little extras effort. |
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| Reviewed by J'nia Fowler |
9/21/2009 |
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| The emptiness he had made for himself. Well said. Hugs, J'nia |
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| Reviewed by Cryssa C |
9/21/2009 |
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This has a soft, lilting feel to it...yet in the end, left me with a coolness--the feeling of what will never be again.
Cryssa |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
9/21/2009 |
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Your poem is beautifully sad, such imagery that makes me almost feel I lost that person. Well done!
Love the description of the woman in the first stanza, lovely!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
9/21/2009 |
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Powerful write, Dawn; well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :( |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
9/21/2009 |
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| I relate. 'Nuff said. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
9/21/2009 |
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| such beautiful writing even in his loss |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo |
9/21/2009 |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
9/21/2009 |
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| Quite a powerful ending. |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
9/21/2009 |
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| EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
9/21/2009 |
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I said once that Solitude is the mother of little sorrows.
Whispers going through silence to the desperately wanted one that never belonged to us...
Georg
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
9/21/2009 |
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Dawn,
I see and feel this, feel it too much really.
John |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
9/21/2009 |
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Vividly imaged sadness, Dawn, very well penned!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
9/20/2009 |
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EXCELLENT! YOUR PHRASES PRODUCE A VIVID PICTURE OF THE 'ACHE' OF RETURNING TO REALITY. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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