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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
10/31/2009 |
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Yes. We all get stuck. These words are wise indeed!
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Ed J. |
10/30/2009 |
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I love this one. A truth we all know and live with.
Stay well and keep writing
Ed |
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| Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson |
10/21/2009 |
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isn't that the truth...someone please break the cycle
enjoyed |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
10/21/2009 |
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YOU KNOW HOW I LOOK AT THINGS DAWN...'ALL THINGS WORK TOGETHER FOR GOOD TO THEM THAT LOVE GOD AND ARE CALLED ACCORDING TO 'HIS' PURPOSE'
...SOMEHOW...GOD WILL WORK IT OUT. BUT....IF ONE DOES NOT HAVE THIS VIEWPOINT...THIS IS A VERY SAD POSITION TO BE IN INDEED...WITHOUT EVEN BEING AWARE OF IT. VERY NICE WORK...MAKES THE READER STOP AND THINK. THANKS FOR THE SHARE AND BLESSINGS.
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
10/20/2009 |
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| VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
10/19/2009 |
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Excellent wisdom in truthful lines, Dawn, well done. That pic is gorgeous, as well.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
10/19/2009 |
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Great insight, Dawn, our demons and choices and uncertainties put out there and evaluated in well expressed lines.
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
10/19/2009 |
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| sadly, that which we know is rarely permanent; there is no such thing as the status quo, however much the conservative in us might wish it; the goal posts are always shifting. Conservatism is a noose around the neck - we stifle that which we try to maintain. And also most certainly we choose to stay safe within the toxically uncomfortable, crazy with the devils we know rather than the devils we don't, harvesting our own bitter crop. In seeking fruitfulness and abundance, we need to positively step beyond the stony ground... you've got me preaching to myself here, Dawn! Bless you - always a mind-matrix of which I'm very fond xx |
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| Reviewed by Carin' Spirit |
10/19/2009 |
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| Dawn, So creatively expressed. It's all about putting that next foot out there, whatever direction that may be. Thank you for sharing. Carin' |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
10/19/2009 |
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You pack a lot of wisdom into these few lines, Dawn.
We who hesitate, etcetera....
-gene. |
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| Reviewed by L Hippler |
10/19/2009 |
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"Seeking comfort in the uncomfortable" That was perfect. I think you caught it all in that single line, Dawn.
Larry |
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| Reviewed by Cryssa C |
10/19/2009 |
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Your photo goes so beautifully with your words. I agree that so often we strive to hold onto what we have--when we would have so much more if we would let go and allow ourselves to fly...
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| Reviewed by David Hightower |
10/19/2009 |
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Dawn - Like the irony of the title which reflects our tendency to fear the unfamiliar even when the familiar is not satisfactory as in:
seeking comfort in
the uncomfortable…
becoming not what we are meant to be,
but that which we choose.
Thought provoking. - David |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
10/19/2009 |
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Very sage advice filtering through the lovely colours of this poem with such truth. Unless forced to move forward we will stagnate until life and all it's adventures pass us by.
fee |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
10/19/2009 |
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| Deep. Understandable. Sad. |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
10/19/2009 |
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....so right on Dawn...and this is so true in all stages of our life and growth....I love this poem and will read it again as it really hits home
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
10/19/2009 |
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Holding the open umbrella against the storm's grab or letting it go before it takes us down?...choices...
Georg
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
10/19/2009 |
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Dawn, you have been reading my latest poetry, Life is all about choices and we must strive for making better choices in order to live fulfilled. Nicely written, very inspirational.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
10/19/2009 |
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| there is so much to this write, dawn-such a beautiful and profound piece |
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper |
10/19/2009 |
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| Yes, the seasons do bring variations of mood. With the first cold spell here in FL where I live, calling for the heater to be turned on, I am completely aware that my mood is different than it was during hot sunny days. I love sleeping late in the cozy warmth of the comforter tucked about me. |
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| Reviewed by Paul Judges |
10/19/2009 |
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| Delightful piece, Dawn |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
10/18/2009 |
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| Excellent philisophical offering, Dawn!great perception... |
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