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| Reviewed by Jerry Engler |
11/12/2009 |
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| Understanding the bridge into the future let alone successfully finding it. Your poem illustrates a quiet contemplation that usually is the bridge to fulfilled life........Jerry |
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| Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis |
11/7/2009 |
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| The photograph is lovely and beautifully compliments your contemplation. You are an astute and ever-wise student of Life. |
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| Reviewed by Art Sun |
11/1/2009 |
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nice thoughts Dawn...
we are a present waiting to become the future... |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
10/31/2009 |
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I love how you ended the first verse, Dawn. Enjoyed this poem.
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Ed J. |
10/30/2009 |
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You are a poet of moments, saying so much in so few words. Wonderful write.
Stay well and keep writing
Ed |
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| Reviewed by Carin' Spirit |
10/27/2009 |
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| Thank you for sharing. Be Well, Carin' |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
10/25/2009 |
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DONE WELL, DAWN. I APPLAUD THE GIFT WITHIN YOU. THANK YOU FOR SHARING THIS LOVELY WORK ON THE REWARDS OF FAITH. BLESSINGS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
10/24/2009 |
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Excellent write dawn
a perfect picture for your
outstanding posting
Love & peace
William |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
10/24/2009 |
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As always you waste no words but do not skimp on emotion when you write. This is excellant...poetry at its best.
hugs
fee |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
10/24/2009 |
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I am drawn into your philosophical outlook as expressed via your verses here, Dawn. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by David Hightower |
10/24/2009 |
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Dawn - Enjoyed The Road to There. Liked how you begin the poem with:
She
imagines life as
a bridge
an expansive space
linking the past
to the present
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and end it with:
slowly
shaping the now,
into its
future.
- David |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
10/24/2009 |
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| EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
10/24/2009 |
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This poem reminds the reader of that song, Bridge over troubled waters, and that the pasture is greener on the other side, or what can be called ...hope.
Georg
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| Reviewed by L Hippler |
10/23/2009 |
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Another good one, Dawn. I honestly think your poetry is getting even better with each week.
Larry |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
10/23/2009 |
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Dawn,
Well expressed vivid images in pursuit of the elusive, tantalising 'there'
John |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
10/23/2009 |
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| A deeply meditative poem with superb metaphor, Dawn! |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
10/23/2009 |
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| beautiful, reflective then powerful-i enjoyed this! |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
10/23/2009 |
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Dawn,
Excellent poetry. The bridges are ours to cross and although we get some wrong we do get some right. Bless You My Friend Always, Paul. |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
10/23/2009 |
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..so true Dawn..we should never lose sight of 'there' as we travel down this road, such insight to life as I read this wonderful poem!
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
10/23/2009 |
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| Well said, Dawn. I'm glad to know there is a there there. -gene. |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
10/23/2009 |
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| You can't burn the bridge of life because you have already crossed it. |
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper |
10/23/2009 |
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| A beautiful picture and a beautiful poem. I like the concept you've painted with words--a bridge that links the past to the present. Nicely done. |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
10/23/2009 |
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WOW, Dawn, much to ponder in these thought provoking lines - well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Ron Karcz |
10/23/2009 |
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Nice thought and well put, as usual. By thye way, how is your bridge building going?
Ron xo |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
10/23/2009 |
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| I hear you, Dawn / Sometimes we have to let go in order to forge ahead / The future can scare us, but it is the future which should be scared of us . . . |
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