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| Reviewed by Jerry Engler |
11/12/2009 |
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| I loved the growth in this poem from the opening thoughts clean andsoft to final beauty of life's contradictions. You painted an interesting progression in thought and awareness beginning with the great opening stanza.............Jerry |
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| Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis |
11/7/2009 |
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| That opening stanza is pure and wonderful! The entire piece is calming and "open" and oh-so-relatable. |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
11/1/2009 |
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| SO TRUE...UPS - DOWNS, RIGHT - WRONG, STOP - GO....STILL PRESSING ON...PROGRESSING. YOUR INSIGHT AND REVELATIONS PERTAINNG TO HUMAN NATURE IS MARVELOUS AND ALWAYS...DONE WELL. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSING. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
10/31/2009 |
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It's that growing part that keeps us on our toes. A fine write:)
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Ed J. |
10/30/2009 |
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Dreams are wonderful things but not always realistic. Trial and error is the way of life's learning.
Stay well and keep writing
Ed |
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| Reviewed by Dallas D'Angelo-Gary |
10/29/2009 |
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| Well done. Contrast is what makes a life beautiful. |
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| Reviewed by J'nia Fowler |
10/29/2009 |
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| Thoughts clean and solf.... I really enjoyed this little poem. So rich and so very authentic. Love it. Hugs, J'nia |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
10/27/2009 |
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| This is a warm and wonderful poem about your personal journey Dawn...gives us a little more of you to know;-)Thanks for the treat! |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
10/27/2009 |
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| this is beautiful-a physical writing of your story along with the written word! |
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| Reviewed by David Hightower |
10/27/2009 |
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Dawn - Profound meditation on life and its imperfections. Especially liked the ending:
still, I grow as I learn from
mistakes past and present, smiling
at the beauty of lifes contradictions.
- David
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
10/27/2009 |
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Dawn,
A true philosopher speaks in this, eternal and timeless, and with a deep and forgiving understanding of human frailty.
John |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
10/27/2009 |
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LIke the way this poem unfolded and let us draw our own impressions...well done.
hugs
fee |
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| Reviewed by Carin' Spirit |
10/27/2009 |
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| so gentle and upbeat...things seem alright. thanks |
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| Reviewed by Peter Schlosser |
10/27/2009 |
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| This is incredible poetry. Great stuff. |
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| Reviewed by Dale Clark |
10/27/2009 |
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Beautiful, Dawn, we need to live by these words!
Love it! |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
10/27/2009 |
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Oh Sweetness in your words, yes a wise person learns from their past indiscretions!!! Never harbor guilt or remorse, for we are what we were and what we will be! Nicely written my dear friend.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
10/27/2009 |
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| Dawn, there's a lovely universality about the way you think and write. I suppose we all are victims or benefactors of life's contradictions. Excellent. -gene. |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Diamond |
10/27/2009 |
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We sure are all on a steep learning curve in life Dawn
Hang tough !
Jerry |
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| Reviewed by Carol Grace |
10/27/2009 |
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| Really nice poem, Dawn. Cotton lined dreams--love that line. |
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| Reviewed by Axilea Uzumcuoglu |
10/27/2009 |
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Lovely and clear, with an image that speaks to the senses in the very first stanza.
Axilea |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
10/27/2009 |
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THIS is one of your absolute best, Dawn.
"gentle whispers of days to unfold." says so very much / The rest of the poem sorta revolves around this line in my opinion / I reread it and am amazed at the subtle suggestions, the out-and-out reality of words and lines which underline deep thought . . . |
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper |
10/27/2009 |
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| Dawn, this is beautiful. I think that among all your poems that I've read, I like this one best because it characterizes mankind in general. Nice job. |
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| Reviewed by John Bidwell |
10/27/2009 |
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Magical words,a nice white puffy thought here.
:)
John |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
10/27/2009 |
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Wonderful message in this, Dawn; well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :) |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
10/27/2009 |
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Mistakes are little life's presents that come wrapped with regret and bound with a ribbon of sadness.
Georg
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
10/27/2009 |
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| Our mistakes can truly be powerful teachers. |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
10/27/2009 |
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So beautiful, Dawn, lovely images. Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
10/27/2009 |
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| '... my cotton lined dreams, gentle whispers of days to unfold'....'each a personal page from a book whose ending has yet to be written'--------- I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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