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| Reviewed by Art Sun |
9/26/2010 |
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Nice touch Dawn...autumn is such a nice new beginning, change...we all need those seasonal changes to enjoy and to reflect upon the ending and the desires for them to return...
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
9/12/2010 |
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A lovely, apt, and timely fall offering, Dawn. Thank you for sharing it. Love and best wishes,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
9/11/2010 |
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Though I am happy to live where the seasons change, there
is nothing like the Fall at the South Jersey Shore. -gene.
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| Reviewed by Michelle Mead |
9/9/2010 |
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| YES!!! I am soooo and autumn/winter person, Miss Sun Allergy as I am, and I looooooooooooooove this poem, but then, I always love your work, Dawn~ xxxx Michelle |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo |
9/9/2010 |
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| Lovely piece Dawn! Autumn is my favorite season, so I am always glad when it arrives...each season has its own beauty, its own offerings, all of which are to be cherished. Enjoyable read! ~Hugs, Elizabeth |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
9/9/2010 |
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a beautifully written piece Dawn
Here I am waiting for the gives of Fall
the scent, that lingers in the air
the taste of holiday treats,
the sights I wait for with great anticipation,
to behold my eyes.......
love & peace be with you
William |
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| Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather |
9/8/2010 |
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| Fall, you can see through the trees to see the stars! - Beautiful - Morgan |
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| Reviewed by J'nia Fowler |
9/8/2010 |
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| Lovely, as are the paintings. J'nia |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
9/7/2010 |
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| ...AND YOU HAVE EXPRESSED YOUR BITTERSWEET FEELINGS SO ARTICALLY. DONE SO VERY WELL...YOU NEVER DISAPPOINT YOUR READERS. THANKS FOR SHARING, MUCH LOVE AND BLESSINGS....JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by David Maclellan |
9/7/2010 |
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Beautiful Dawn! Our Spring starts as your Autumn begins, isn't nature incredible?
Blessings to you
David |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
9/7/2010 |
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| beautiful and perfect for this season |
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| Reviewed by Emile Tubiana |
9/6/2010 |
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| Dear Dawn, I visited your den for the first time and I found that your writes are deep and well expressed. Thank you for sharing your most precious gift. Love, Emile |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner |
9/6/2010 |
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Dawn, Dawn, Dawn, each season has such beauty, the dark nights are the cosy nights, the autumn has a beauty of solitude and we only love summer thanks to the beauty of the other seasons.
You can go play conkers and catching leaves 'neath the full moon light.
Beaut of a write from a beautiful lass. x |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
9/6/2010 |
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| Love your last stanza since I can now smell Autumn, too. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
9/5/2010 |
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| captures the season ;) |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
9/5/2010 |
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How gently, subtly you ease us into the season, Dawn.
I'd love to be able to sleep comfortably with my window open at night; unfortunately it's too humid all the year round. Where I am, I miss the seasons and their changing quilts.
John |
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| Reviewed by Susan Sonnen |
9/5/2010 |
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| And that is exactly how it arrives! You can feel it and smell it and see it all at once. I love this. :) |
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper |
9/5/2010 |
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| A lovely picture and you capture the essence of its autumn scene and the mood of the season. With some leaves already falling, I, too, feel a sense of spring passing into autumn. |
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| Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg |
9/5/2010 |
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| awareness of the constant change in the world around us...nicely noticed |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
9/5/2010 |
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| I embrace the new chapter, pumpkin patches and fresh air, though I am with you,,,LOVE summer!!! |
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| Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat |
9/5/2010 |
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Dawn,
What a refreshing feeling! We haven't had that yet, summer is still beating hard, but I'm looking forward to it by next month.
Mary |
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| Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader) |
9/5/2010 |
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| I was thinking the same thing yesterday by the Pacific Ocean. You can see a slight change of water color and feel a small bite in the wind as autumn slowly creeps ashore. It's actually my favorite time of year. Nice poem Dawn. |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
9/5/2010 |
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| Totally with you in this, Dawn, being a sunshine-type BUT, having been blessed with a wonderful, lengthy period of dry and fair climes, I'm ready for the first time in many years to feel the contrasting sensual swell in the elements that are now daily presenting. Your words move us into this phase of transition nicely. xx |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
9/5/2010 |
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Enchanting, mysterious, soft ~
And so many things seem to drift in that open window as I read this...wisdom, the vast unknown, the smell of autumn leaves and some peach pie ~
Blessings,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
9/5/2010 |
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Dawn, Embrace this new season to give you joy for the gifts that will arrive at your door. You are blessed and will receive many more blessings as the colors change in your world.
Much peace, love and light,
Amber |
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| Reviewed by The Poetess |
9/5/2010 |
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I absoulutely love the first verse! The idea of a season arriving "through an open window in the middle of the night. . ." is enchanting.
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
9/5/2010 |
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| Wonderful writing sweet Dawn,,have a wonderful and safe day ..Hugss |
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| Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill |
9/5/2010 |
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Nice work, reminding us of the seasons that change. Autumn makes me think of winter which I really don't think I'll enjoy. But then when its here, I find more peace than I expect!
Peace,
Dayvid |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
9/5/2010 |
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| VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
9/5/2010 |
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| Spring and Fall I look forward too. Our Summers on Long Island NY are a lot like Florida's these days. They can have them back. |
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