|Reviewed by Joyce Bell
|I CAN RELATE TO THAT SPECIAL PLACE WHERE THE CLOUDS GIVE WAY TO THE SUN...IT IS GOOD TO BASK THERE A WHILE. 'CAUSE WHEN WE HIT THE GROUND...AND WE ALL DO AT SOME TIME OR ANOTHER...WE FIND WE'VE BEEN FORTIFIED, SO THAT THE 'THUD' DOES NOT DESTROY US...WE GET UP AND RUN ON WITH HOPE IN OUR HEARTS - EAGER TO SEE WHAT THE END...WILL BE. I LOVED THIS ONE, DAWN. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS|
|Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
|I agree with the others. Just let things happen. Let it be. A human being rather than a human doing. Smiles...|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|You have effectively conveyed your sentiments using the genre of concrete poetry where the shape of the poem or the verses serve to illustrate the concepts that you are presenting. Very nicely done, Dawn. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|Lovely, as always, Dawn. The crux of this, I believe,
is just to be the beautiful, creative Dawn you are.
|Reviewed by Axilea MU
|It can be a healthy fall. *smile*
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Dawn, the pic and poem make a perfect theme! I too freefall, but only in thought;-)etw|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Freefalling is a surefire way to get your priorities readjusted. Careful though, sometimes it also hurts.|
|Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
|Reviewed by jude forese
|freefalling certainly clears the clouds ...|
|Reviewed by The Poetess
|Love this "freefall" into being.|
|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|very creative and fun. -Morgan|
|Reviewed by L Hippler
|A very fun one. I love it.|
|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
|For me, this is the perfect metaphor for life. At 35, I can count the 'sunny moments' on one hand. I like the artistic format in this poem. A great poem, Dawn.
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Yes, we need to just let go sometimes, creative Dawn!!!|
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
I understand this as going from that state of inner bliss to a place of allowing life to be outside your expected margins, and always
the heart travels along.
It's fun the way you make us interact with this one!
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Remaining permanently suspended in a contented hammock of sunbeams seems the way to go, Dawn! Think we'd all like to agree there! :)) xx|
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|Very light and airy!!! Lovely photo to capture your mood.
Much peace, love and light,
|Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
|I love the lightness of this poem and it's message too. I wrote a poem last year called "Faithful Disciple" about spending an afternoon with my dachshund Claudius in my backyard. You should go read it. See if you see the similarity in messages captured in the final line. Great work.|
|Reviewed by D. Vaineo
|Dawn, Creative and wise...
|Reviewed by Andy Turner
|Indeed, just down, down and down, free-falling in to reality.
Nice one Alice, stay away from the Queen of Hearts.
And remain forever free just to be.
|Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis
|Creative and visually artistic, bursting with lightrays of wisdom . . .|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Love the way you used the format to compliment your thoughts in this delightful poem...well done.
|Reviewed by F William Broome
|Imaginative beyond`````````! An excellent one and lovely.|
|Reviewed by John Domino
|A very artistic poetic picture. Meditation is GREAT and we (Americans) have much to learn from the eastern world. My most relaxing times are when I took yoga classes in England and when I practiced meditation in Japan. However, I was once in a corpse position and it took a long time for my partner to wake me up. She was a bit frightened by this so I backed off from that practice for a while. Well, I can always start again! Thanks for the refresher!
Love, peace and blessings,
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOUR WORDS!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Ah such wisdom to greet me at 5am in the morning.|
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|...rhat you learn is everything, Dawn, that we all learn. Why is just being often so hard to achieve? It took me years to know I didn't have to be 'doing' all the time to be living.
That burst of light in the picture is revelation.