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Morning Meditation
by Dawn Anderson
Sunday, September 12, 2010
Rated "G" by the Author.
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there is a place in my thoughts where

clouds give way to sun, and contentedly

i linger there awhile.

 

yet, now and then i

 

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and hit the ground with an unexpected thud,

learning i need do nothing other, than just be.

 

 

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Reviewed by JMS Bell 10/19/2010
I CAN RELATE TO THAT SPECIAL PLACE WHERE THE CLOUDS GIVE WAY TO THE SUN...IT IS GOOD TO BASK THERE A WHILE. 'CAUSE WHEN WE HIT THE GROUND...AND WE ALL DO AT SOME TIME OR ANOTHER...WE FIND WE'VE BEEN FORTIFIED, SO THAT THE 'THUD' DOES NOT DESTROY US...WE GET UP AND RUN ON WITH HOPE IN OUR HEARTS - EAGER TO SEE WHAT THE END...WILL BE. I LOVED THIS ONE, DAWN. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by J'nia Fowler 9/22/2010
I agree with the others. Just let things happen. Let it be. A human being rather than a human doing. Smiles...
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 9/16/2010
You have effectively conveyed your sentiments using the genre of concrete poetry where the shape of the poem or the verses serve to illustrate the concepts that you are presenting. Very nicely done, Dawn. Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Regis
Reviewed by Gene Williamson 9/16/2010
Lovely, as always, Dawn. The crux of this, I believe,
is just to be the beautiful, creative Dawn you are.
-gene.
Reviewed by Axilea MU 9/15/2010
It can be a healthy fall. *smile*

Axilea
Reviewed by E T Waldron 9/14/2010
Dawn, the pic and poem make a perfect theme! I too freefall, but only in thought;-)etw
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 9/14/2010
Freefalling is a surefire way to get your priorities readjusted. Careful though, sometimes it also hurts.
Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg 9/13/2010
perfection
Reviewed by jude forese 9/13/2010
freefalling certainly clears the clouds ...
Reviewed by The Poetess 9/13/2010
Love this "freefall" into being.
Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather 9/13/2010
very creative and fun. -Morgan
Reviewed by L Hippler 9/13/2010
A very fun one. I love it.
Reviewed by Sheila Roy 9/13/2010
For me, this is the perfect metaphor for life. At 35, I can count the 'sunny moments' on one hand. I like the artistic format in this poem. A great poem, Dawn.
Sheila
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 9/13/2010
Yes, we need to just let go sometimes, creative Dawn!!!
Reviewed by Christine Tsen 9/13/2010
Priceless ~
I understand this as going from that state of inner bliss to a place of allowing life to be outside your expected margins, and always
the heart travels along.
It's fun the way you make us interact with this one!
Blessings,
Christine
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 9/13/2010
Remaining permanently suspended in a contented hammock of sunbeams seems the way to go, Dawn! Think we'd all like to agree there! :)) xx
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 9/13/2010
Very light and airy!!! Lovely photo to capture your mood.

Much peace, love and light,
Amber
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader) 9/13/2010
I love the lightness of this poem and it's message too. I wrote a poem last year called "Faithful Disciple" about spending an afternoon with my dachshund Claudius in my backyard. You should go read it. See if you see the similarity in messages captured in the final line. Great work.
Reviewed by D. Vegas 9/13/2010
Dawn, Creative and wise...
Always,
Deborah
Reviewed by Andy Turner 9/13/2010
Indeed, just down, down and down, free-falling in to reality.
Nice one Alice, stay away from the Queen of Hearts.
And remain forever free just to be.
Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis 9/13/2010
Creative and visually artistic, bursting with lightrays of wisdom . . .
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 9/13/2010
Very creative...

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Felix Perry 9/13/2010
Love the way you used the format to compliment your thoughts in this delightful poem...well done.
fee
Reviewed by F William Broome 9/13/2010
Imaginative beyond`````````! An excellent one and lovely.
Reviewed by John Domino 9/13/2010
A very artistic poetic picture. Meditation is GREAT and we (Americans) have much to learn from the eastern world. My most relaxing times are when I took yoga classes in England and when I practiced meditation in Japan. However, I was once in a corpse position and it took a long time for my partner to wake me up. She was a bit frightened by this so I backed off from that practice for a while. Well, I can always start again! Thanks for the refresher!

Love, peace and blessings,

John Michael

Reviewed by Liana Margiva 9/13/2010
VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOUR WORDS!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by George Carroll 9/13/2010
Ah such wisdom to greet me at 5am in the morning.
Reviewed by John Flanagan 9/13/2010
...rhat you learn is everything, Dawn, that we all learn. Why is just being often so hard to achieve? It took me years to know I didn't have to be 'doing' all the time to be living.
That burst of light in the picture is revelation.

John



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