|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|If you have room enough to live, then you have room enough to give (love). If you have room enough to love you have room enough to grow. If you have room enough to grow then you are learning and therefore, like the rest of us, not just passing through. That is why your expression is so valid and beautiful.
|Reviewed by Art Sun
|nice work Dawn...one lives and at times understands so little of what life truly is...a gift...
|Reviewed by Cryssa C
|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
|Seems like our sense of urgency to have few regrets comes with every year. I feel it big time, these days. Hugs,
|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|Thank you, Dawn, for these movingly crafted words
to live by. You prove again that you are in fact alive,
and that I applaud. -gene.
|Reviewed by JMS Bell
|AMEN! ALIVE, INDEED! AND I AM THANKFUL FOR YOUR LIFE, THAT YOU SHARE THESE WONDERFUL 'NOTES' OF ENCOURAGEMENT AND FORESIGHT. THANK YOU FOR SHARING, DAWN. MAY GOD CONTINUE TO BLESS AND KEEP YOU, MUCH LOVE, IN FAITH, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|uplifting as well as thoughtful and enlightened ...|
|Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
|I think you have said something simply profound here Dawn. To live wholly we must live responsibly as though wringing out the very last drop of goodness from each day. I like this poem very much. J'nia|
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|Living in the Moment, that has been my mantra since I left my ex husband...I embrace each and everyday...wonderful poem..
Peace, love and light,
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Yes, thank you Dawn! I needed to read this poem tonight.
Your wisdom is so much needed ~ to seize each day firmly and live to the fullest!
Love and Blessings,
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|This is so softly beautiful-truly, i love it!|
|Reviewed by Debby & Gordon Rosenberg
|hehe....well done! love the attitude!|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Yes life can be over in the beating of a heartbeat, I know mine has stopped a few times...
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Good advice Dawn, words to live by indeed~|
|Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
|Preaching to the choir. But I think we've already establsihed that. Love how your poems are so smooth and light. Take it easy.|
|Reviewed by John Bidwell
|Whatever you do- keep being you.
|Reviewed by Ragno Donna
|Reviewed by F William Broome
|Your words creep along until they reach our and envelop me. This is sweet and soft confession, and very well written. - Bill|
|Reviewed by D Johnson
|Dawn, this is a great philosophy, one we should all pay attention to.
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|To Live - something we all truly need to work at.|
|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|ahh, the daily rut. If you look close, it always changing. Take the good and go! softly contemplative...like your words. Morgan|
|Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis
|Yes, to be a conscious creator, a deliberate thinker, a joyful, intentional contributor to the All That Is; love this, Dawn!|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|I quite understand the phrase, "Occasionally, I think about death –" as I have those thoughts on an almost daily occurrence. As far as I know there has been only one person who could truthfully say they lived without regret and He was crucified in the end. I know that I can't say that. I can say, however, that I have made peace with that regret and it doesn't harass me as much as it used to. My take on thinking about death is that (in my own narrow world) I feel I have too much to do to die anytime soon. Am I deluding myself? Maybe. Still . . .|
|Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford
Because I love your poetry I'm happy to be able to come here and read your latest during our "down" time (won't be much longer). Your poetry makes life sparkle; gifted you are my friend.
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|We have one life to live, we should make the best of it as it is a path along our way Dawn. Great write.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|How wise and achievable if we put our mind to it.
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|I LOVE YOUR WORDS!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|"...happening rather than unfolding"...most people will identify with that, Dawn, the main way of the world, and it is up to the individual if she/he can to do something worthwhile, different, interesting, challenging to be alive.