|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|I do not know why...but I find I must ask...but was it real for them? I love how you express things.
|Reviewed by Jon Willey
|Time and recall season the memory lightly and then glaze over it. Somewhere between the seasoning and the glaze is where the truth becomes illusive. A poem to set the emotions wondering and searching for the core of truth Dawn. Love and peace to you my dear friend. Jon Michael|
|Reviewed by Cryssa C
|What you do so well... creating snapshots with concise, sharp lines... and oh the truth they speak...
|Reviewed by Art Sun
|nice thoughts Dawn...even memories are like history, they can place us within the past and hold us within those seconds of reflections...nice|
|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
|Nicely penned. A vital lesson, too.
|Reviewed by JMS Bell
|OUR OBSERVANCE OF OTHERS ARE REMARKABLE...ESPECIALLY THOSE CLOSE TO US. AND WE WISH WE COULD 'READ' THEIR THOUGHTS...THEN WE WOULDN'T HAVE TO 'GUESS' AT WHAT IS ON ANOTHER PERSON'S MIND...WE'D KNOW. WELL DONE AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING; LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH....JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS|
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Very perceptive of how we sometimes see things, not as they were but as we want them to be...
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|... ah yes... you can see the paintbrush sweeping across that far-gazing expression, can't you, Dawn?! A delicate and finely-crafted capture of an ever-present tendancy. What's so very sad is that often those prone to such rose-tinted nostalgia seemed actually absent at the time... at least, emotionally. "Ah, yes... I remember it well!" Love this, bless you, Kate xx|
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|Excellent write Dawn
This wonderfully written piece
goes well with your New Bio Pic.......lol
Love & Peace be with you
|Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
|your poetry always speaks volumes within its few lines...that talent and this scribe is a beautiful gift|
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|Without such retouched memory many would live poorly for living vicariously is one of the arts of the romantic and the imaginative.
You deliver this very well, Dawn.
|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|Wonderful, Dawn. At my stage in history, my mind is
crammed with retouched memories. -gene.
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|thought provoking, i like it|
|Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford
|A wonderful write Dawn. Something about it makes it very visual for me.
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|A moment captured in time -- PERFECTLY penned, Dawn.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|The glossed over memory...your poem is succinct and "captured" that perfectly. ~morgan|
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|Dawn, After reading this exquisite poem, I hear myself saying this phrase, "Beauty is in the eyes of the Beholder", your poem is a kodak moment.
Wonderful and to the point.
Much peace, love and light,
|Reviewed by D Johnson
|Amazing little poem layered with many truths.
|Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
|I find myself doing this quite a bit, swimming in the past, nostalgic and longing for Kodak moments caught on film which never really developed. Excellent piece.|
|Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat
It's true, time is a memory sometimes only caught in a Kodak. Great write.
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Dawn, this is so telling, excellent work~|
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
It's true, memories can be as quirky as the people that re-live them!
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Quite powerful, Dawn.|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|It is funny how our memories coupled with time tend to ferment the barest hints of a long ago image into a sharp crisp picture of what we would have liked it to be....you captured that well here.
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|The eyes. The entrance to feelings inner.|
|Reviewed by steve Chering
|You're almost describing my hair this morning.
nice one Dawn.
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Ah, how we love to repaint the past. In brevity you grabbed the heart of the matter. Splend work.
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|