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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
12/24/2010 |
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Such a thought-inciting write, Dawn; I find myself relating closely to what you have shared within your verses and I think your student is fortunate to have you as a teacher (mentor). Thank you. Love and best wishes,
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
11/23/2010 |
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| Dawn, this addresses issues of convergence and a very real degree of divergence as well. Divergence in the sense of, "yet they often drift just beyond reach to a dimension she cannot fully comprehend". She is reasonably sure they exist yet she is unable to comprehend them. Your student is most fortunate to have such a knowledgeable resource and mentor available to her. I wish you and your family a very happy Thanksgiving my dear friend. I bid you love and peace. Jon Michael |
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| Reviewed by Cryssa C |
11/1/2010 |
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This brought me a smile... as it made me think of one of my daughters and the abstract world that she sometimes lives in that doesn't really exist, but that she fully believes exists.
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
10/22/2010 |
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In still moments like this, a leap of faith was born. A wonderful tribute to your student!
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
10/21/2010 |
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Lucky student. Dawn, you are the gifted, warm, thoughtful, and
loving teacher that love to have had 'way back when. Fortunately,
we learn much from you today. Love the poem. -gene. |
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| Reviewed by Michael Madden |
10/21/2010 |
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| Wonderful, even down to the abstract nature of the structure. I hope your student loves it. |
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| Reviewed by Hariharan Balakrishnan |
10/21/2010 |
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| Truly inspirational, particularly when it is meant for a student. Reflects true love and understanding. |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
10/20/2010 |
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A certain irony in the title, Dawn, and yet it's right; abstracts draw us in many directions and move beyond us, too.
You've nailed this.
John |
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| Reviewed by m j hollingshead |
10/20/2010 |
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| lovely work |
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| Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis |
10/20/2010 |
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| Not just lovely writing, but also lovely thinking, lovely poet, lovely teacher. |
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| Reviewed by L Hippler |
10/20/2010 |
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| Perfect poem to go with that painting, Dawn. |
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| Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader) |
10/20/2010 |
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| I have a hard time grasping abstract sometimes; but I ate a bagel once, baked potato, I like baked potatoes, and the cow jumped over the moon, the moon, somebody get me a blanket, it's cold and the signals are in my head, they know me, know I'm here, do you like hockey, I like hockey, big parades.................what?????????? Lovely poem Dawn. Big fan of Pollack too. Hope you're well. |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
10/20/2010 |
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| Pollocks work was/is certainly revolutionary. And the closer you get to it the more it mystifies. Your thoughts for this young person, here, reveal a loving heart that cares. Blessings to you ... richard |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
10/20/2010 |
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Oh yes, so profoundly have you caught a state of mind here! I'm guessing about 15. How I love this because of the way you have tied art into your poem, and because you have captured this so imaginatively!
Blessings,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
10/20/2010 |
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| ...and the more she studies, the more she will see, that is the beauty of art and life~forever changing |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
10/20/2010 |
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| Quite an interesting piece and perspective, Dawn. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
10/20/2010 |
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| very nice write! introspective from the view of a young person! |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
10/20/2010 |
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| Last two lines is the kicker. I've often thought of myself as an abstract painting, albeit, a dark one. Nice work, Dawn. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
10/20/2010 |
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I think in life we all have these moments in time where our very existnace is questioned and the answers float tantalizingly just out of reach in a congested cyber space.
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
10/20/2010 |
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| VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
10/20/2010 |
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Abstract art leaves many avenues of thought to give it lasting life.
George |
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